Setting up the story
I guess i suck when it comes to have a continuity in the story telling. i just hope it doesn't bother anyone. i'm open to criticism so please if you want to coment let me know what i can improve.  !
Friendship to Love
#1 of friendship to love this is my first story, tell me what you think. i own these... so hi, my name is seth. i'm a nine-teen year old wolf. my fur is grey with a white belly. i've always been smaller than most other wolves, i'm only five eleven.
A New Town, A New Life (2)
Well despite the luke warm reaction to the first chapter i have decided to post chapter 2, please, if you love or loathe the story tell me in the coments section, as a writer i need to know that my work is at least being read.
Matheau and Beijore 11: Bad Dream
So he launched full on into the story, telling her every detail, every emotion, every single thing that happened. even the smallest details that most would think minute, he told her about.
PI Isaac Case #1 chapter 8
#8 of pi isaac case #1 sorry for the low story telling, i really need to manage my time better. i followed oliver into ms. young's house, making sure i narrowly avoid his tail as i walked.
To protect life - introduction
#1 of to protect life the first part of an story telling the days acticities of a fireman unity. a fireman's prayer when i am called to duty, god, whenever flames may rage; give me strength to save some life, whatever be its age.
A Dragon's Love: Curiosity
I'd like to thank everyone who supports me and the art of story telling. kudos to you! the goddess smiled down at her swollen belly, something she wore from time to time as she remembered carrying valor in her celestial womb.
New Life, New Problems; a new life chapter 6
Like in the next chapter i'm taking on the role of skye; trying to get a feel for 1st person story telling.
Beta Decay: introduction-- Reaction
Please write me in the comments if i should continue the story. tell me what you think =] you can call me thor. i never thought much about how death would happen.
Perceptional - Pt 1
Go read the story! tell me what sucks! as the first rays of morning light spilled over the horizon, a blue bird perched itself on a window frame, unremarkable among many.
The Walls I Built
I think the problem with this chapter is that, at the time i wrote this, i was too insecure with my writing that i focused too much on trying to make it sound mature and intelligent that i lost sight of other important aspects of story-telling.
Experimentation
Just a little story. tell me what you think. pale, yellow lights flickered from the ceiling. several bare bulbs dangled down from discolored cords with long fluorescent bulbs scattered throughout, their glow missing like a tree without its leaves.