Hero Chapter 3
I tried to fix that, but the entire original was in present tense...so i might have missed something here or there while converting it to past tense. side note: like i said before, this is my "mary sue" story, i think.
Days Like The Last: From Text-Book to Tail-Hole
** **before i get into the standard disclaimer i just wanted to give a shout out to gruffy, who, with a critical eye and a lot of patience, found over seven hours of minute errors such as commas, the use of past and present tense, and even a few grammatical
Growth Spurt, Pt. 2 - Tramp, Scamp & the Lamp
My first story ever written in first person present tense. the lamp is on tonight. my heart starts pounding every time i look at it. it's funny how well i remember that day in the park a few weeks ago. that stuff me and dad did...
Maverick Hotel Part 14
"you said that in present tense," i realized slowly. "you mean...?"
Great Idea or Stupid? Hard to Tell...
"you...used the present tense of to be," tyler said, still sounding cautious. "does that mean you two...?" "still bang? yeah. it's part of how your dad's always tried to be a good influence on me and keep me close.
What I Know
present tense, he corrected, nodding. you didn't have to travel great distances to 'go places.' to see things. to live. so, though not as sleek and bright, maybe, as a current station would be, it didn't really matter.
Gym Benefits.
. \_\_\_\_\_\_ **hope you liked it...and i tried to do this in first pov present tense....tell me what if it was...ugh'ish' or if it flowed...any suggestions and what not would be awesome!**
An Obedient Fall
The writing style is simple and naked and the tale is told in the present tense for maximum sadomasochistic punch. should be very fun if you're into that. =3 - setup is quick and dirty, with just a smidge of worldbuilding.
Bastion - Pt. 2
Still the same issue of past and present tense failures.
Visit to the zoo 2nd part
Be aware that i am french and as such i have sometimes a hard time with sentences, and that also suffer from a problem that plague me also in french : i write in a weird past - present tense combo that is not the best tense for stories.
Breeding Grounds -Wolf TF (adult)-
Just added a few paragraphs/scenes and reworded some of the grammar so the present tense and pretense stuff flows better *i hope *** update *** 5-20-14 *** found some more grammatical errors to fix.
It's Always Time - Chapter Seven: We End as We Began
"you keep referring to her in the present tense. it's not over?" > > "not if she can still move," dee said. the slush-covered overshirt started to inch forward. "she's heard everything we've said.