Lion King 1: Ch. 3: Simba's Midnight Fuck
If i had a typo, please tell me that. if you think that this was too choppy, please tell me that. if you want to tell me anything that will help me become a better writer, please tell me.
Just for tonight
#19 of +18 this story contains romance and sex and it's kind of my first written story (at least seeing the light) please any typo or grammar error you would like to point out, i'm all ears....
VIP- Very Important Predator
As always, comments and critiques are welcomed, and please let me know if you find any embarrassing typos so i can fix them and hide my shame from future readers. thanks! arno cast his eye over the entryway as he walked into the resort.
Promises
Any comments or feedback are appreciated, and if you spot any typos please let me know. nat shuddered in orgasmic bliss, her pulsing pussy squeezing out her lover's peak. "please," the cute white mouse begged as he collapsed on top of her, panting.
Grad-Bash Part 14
#14 of scout's honor scout's voice always coming to the rescue in his moment of need =p hope you guys enjoy, the next part will be out by the end of next week, or even tomorrow if i'm feeling up to it =) (and i'm also sorry if there are more typos then usual
Chapter Seven: Entwining Passions
Also, if you see any typos, point them out to me. i'll go through an edit them. same goes for all the previous chapters too.
Edge Walking. Chap 2: Help Wanted
Must b 18 though it was unclear to jamie whether the 'b' before 18 was a typo, or just a means of conserving space, he was sure of one thing: dancersns was not a typo. it was a legal way of implying, "we need you to a dance and prostitute for us."
Thicker: Chapter Fifteen
The stag smirked victoriously, although it was hard for him to concentrate, having to go back to re-write portions of the text over again to smooth out the typos.
First Love: Part 1
Google doc file for those who prefer it: first love: part 1 feel free to comment with constructive criticism or for typos. above all, enjoy. :) first love: part 1 by stuperhero \*beep\* \*beep\* beep\*. "..uhnnn..."
Silver
One last note, i am a published author but i'm not using a word processor to write this so excuse any typos as i tend to get excited and type at super speed when it comes to stuff like this. ----------------------------------------------
Workin' Hard
Prolly some typos and what have you that slipped through due to lack of editing, but hey, wanted to get something done before christmas crunch time. ya'll have a happy holidays, folks. "hey, susan. what you doing down here with us worker drones?"
The origin of shadows
A quick drawing-writting, typos ahead!