Inhuman Relations
Second person and present tense is a challenge and a half along with this style, but i'm confident that i wrote it to the best of my ability.
2.5 - Close Encounters
He covered his maw, modestly. " ... past tensed when you're present tensing?" he finished, cutely. whiskers twitching. that gentle, slightly-effeminate voice of his, tinged with squeaks. "that's a paradox!" another sip o' milkshake. "i'm tipsy.
The Ryan Story Part XIII
Ryan's head snapped up at the present tense and he smiled hesitantly. "you think they are alive?" "i think they are, yes," pax replied. "your parents are very clever. if anyone would survive, they would." "athena said the same thing."
Maranatha - Chapter XIX - as told by Mark Kovalis
"du haven't dit me wo we venir, malloy," elsaesser growls (note the present tense, because the donkeys were knocked out and we moved past them), but malloy ignores him. "malloy! je'm speaking to dich!"
Firestorm ch 10 - Death and Destruction
Silver noted the use of the present tense, and wished that vikki could hear both sides of the conversation.
Visit to the zoo 1st part
Be aware that i am french and as such i have sometimes a hard time with sentences, and that also suffer from a problem that plague me also in french : i write in a weird past - present tense combo that is not the best tense for stories.
Visit to the zoo 3rd part
Be aware that i am french and as such i have sometimes a hard time with sentences, and that also suffer from a problem that plague me also in french : i write in a weird past - present tense combo that is not the best tense for stories.i'll try to finish part
The Mark Callaway Story Chapter 1
I tried to fix that, but the entire original was in present tense...so i might have missed something here or there while converting it to past tense. interesting side note: in the original, their uncle's name was tom.
The Upstanding Citizen
I did a goofy thing where i wrote part of it in present tense and part of it in past tense, and he put in the time to make everything nice and consistent. thanks again, wolfhound -- you rock!
Hyla Brokenfang and the Eye of a God
present tense. it wasn't fair. so she cried until there were no tears left, she sobbed until her stomach ached, and she mourned until there was nothing left but a broken, defeated warrior lying on the floor.
Online Dating
Woodfell is past tense and woodfall is present tense, but hey. you learn something new every day, right?"
Eternal Bond: Chapter 1
So if you find me using present tense anywhere, leave a comment with a quote or message me. this story is a re-write of the first chapter of eternal bond.