Puppy Love Chapter 4
I have no idea how it will end, so any ideas, comments, and critiques are welcome. flames will be laughed at and discarded._ a knock on the doorway behind me caught my attention. i turned around to see my bedroom door open.
After Dark - Intro / Chapter 0
Please critique with this in mind. my first post here, too! ~t] [continued here: [after dark: chapter 1](%5c)] it's always been easier for me to be brave after dark. i don't know why. normally, you'd think the opposite was true.
Dave in the Scouts!
But i figured i'd share this with you guys ^-^ i really hope you enjoy it as much as i enjoyed writing it <3 to see the more naughty art that goes with this story though you'll have to check out my inkbunny :3 same name as here <3 comments ratings and critique
Open Content Stream Story: An Amusing Afternoon
She had critiqued other rulers for raising their heirs poorly, spoiling them and giving them gifts rather than teaching them proper responsibility and how to handle their people. perhaps she should take her own lectures and put them to work.
End Of Our Worlds? Not today Chapter 16
Please feel free to give me hints, critiques as i want to become better. any questions? ask them and i will gladly answer them. have a wonderful day. mickey flies through the clouds, faintly hearing the sound of battle in the distant.
Chair Troubles
. ;3 critique and requests welcome. * * * his tag said "barris." considering he was a bear, sam felt rather sorry for his unfortunate name, almost as sorry as he felt for the equal misfortune of being the manager of mike's discount furniture.
Jack's Jockficiation
critique welcomed :3 jack's mind spun as the thin otter fell back onto the couch, the vial dropping onto the carpet next to his shoes.
Punk'd Out
A punk tf written as a birthday present for renyard2001 over at fa: it was definitely a fun write using music as a hypnotic trigger~ as always, comments and critiques are appreciated!
Dragon Breeding of the Male Kind
However, please be honest with the critiques, this is a whole new can of worms... err, pile of eggs... set of balls... i just haven't written it before so do tell me where i go wrong. negative feedback: no more of this.
Capture!
Please comment and critique, i do appreciate it \<3 )) rhiandra had been left in the crumbling ruins of the old barracks, the kith's former headquarters, once they had moved to light knows where.
Kaeryn: Gone Male Chpt1
Also, friendly critiques of my work are welcome to help me become a better writer. comments bashing me will be removed. kaeryn/tom © me 18+ cheating/impregnation/transformation/ m/f /age play so, i am not too sure what happened. but, it happened.
A Series of Bad Rolls
As usual, please feel free to leave comments and critiques so i may improve~ and thank you very much for reading!~ in the town of hollow springs, a bard had just finished packing up for the night, his fingers aching after hours of playing.