Shadow Nova part 1
Now it's time to see if i remember the revisions i made while typing this up on my stupid phone. fingers crossed it works this time. ** i tossed and turned in my bed. i hit my head on the bed frame and woke up. "fuck!"
A good deed is its own reward
Thanks to xioneer for the revision. "bakotana. get down," a female voice called in the forest. it belonged to a young adult leopard, standing at the side of the footpath. her eyes were green amber.
Sister Wives
My partner for this one has requested they remain anonymous, but has read through the revised copy posted here and given their permission to have it distributed. man, i've been on a girly kick lately.
Journey to the West
I think it actually makes for a better story now that i've revised it a bit._ _enjoy!_ **journey to the west** **chapter one:** the day had turned out to be yet another long, hot day.
Another Bad Date
On any ordinary day, eight o'clock in the evening would be too late for a caffeinated beverage, but riley had a long night of revision ahead. compiling, rewriting, condensing and _rewriting_ page after page of notes.
Dear Journal (First-Person Mrs. Krieg POV)
Unfortunately, i had to revise parts of my diet. for example, with my husband mark to help me, i've had to avoid wine, too much dairy, as well as caffeine.
Only Human (Revised) - Chapter 5
_ _chapter 5 sees some revisions to ideas presented in the original, an earlier reveal of an important detail about tiera, and a hint at a plot element revision.. :)_ * * * tiera paused in her doorway and glanced back at nathan, still fast asleep on her
Alcatraz Ch. I ~ Recruitment
Lots of new characters coming in soon, i mentioned riddick but tai's team is going through revisions into this third version. like i said thanks for reading, it means a lot!** **-djynnerate**
Journey (revised)
so I had to rewrite some of this as my previous work just felt wrong. rushed, incomplete, and worst of all not thought out at all. this is the only story I'm writing for now....
Tropical Revised - Chapter One
"Senior year," said an anthropomorphic bat walking down a crowded high school hall way. "One last stretch, but this is going to be a long year." Walking along side with the bat was an otter with uniquely sky-blue fur, and he simply nodded in...
ULEMI: Urgent Weapons Update
\*ims-106 - international medical standards - edition 106 revision september 7. 2193 anno pax de
Chapter Two: Raising the Bar
#2 of breeder **note:** _this one took a few revisions, and it's a lot shorter and less plot-advancing than i'd have liked.