Glory Days
His breaths were coming in short gasps now, and then i heard his gruff voice as he gave me a running commentary. "oh fuck... ohh tom... so good... fuck... ohhh shit... i'm gonna... i'm gonna... tom, i can't hold on... i'm gonna... tom!"
A Failed Duty - Chapter 11
Disclaimer: the following will contain homosexual individuals and relationships and may be an interesting commentary on life, death, immortality, god, gods and various religions.
Therapy - Session 6
The husky strolled from table to table, tracing his fingertip across the wares, making no real comment to each of the vendors as he continued his commentary. "then there was that other guy. the one with the incest collies?
Chapter IV: Is This Just Real Life
"a commentary please?", koji said, j.d laughing noticing how soical koji gets around him. "the dragon is sunset and if all goes well you'll see his power. the wolf is dusk and the one that caused eric his were-crocodileness.
Nikki's Night Out
He halted his commentary immediately and returned to simple physicality. it wasn't long before he felt he was reaching his peak, so he tried to fuck deeper to make up for his borrowed time.
Breaking The Line Draft 1, CH 20
You don't want to hear the commentaries that accompany them." arnold tried to understand what he was looking at. they all showed men in public places, they were identified by name and age. alex cursed. "are the names real?"
Discharging Ballast (TTW pt. 7)
Kane hated commentary like that. it felt so disingenuous, like there was little tolerance for the struggle of being in the moment of having just seconds to make a decision while these suits had hours to form opinions.
Restless Stop
The tight grip of her jeans around wide hips and the bulge in front drew both stares and commentary from the locals. sooner or later she'd haul off and deck a smart-mouthed bigot and she'd be looking for work again.
A Dinner with Family [Comm]
Two brothers stood exchanging joking commentary and conveniently blocking access to the oven.
Hi dad! (Corrected)
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My Guardian Demons - Part 1
They didn't command me to do things, or criticize my every action, but seemed to be content with forming a sort of commentary track to everything i did.
Small Steps
Then you've got the wait staff walking around taking orders, being peppy and friendly, music coming from the speakers, and maybe even sports commentary if you happen to be in a sports bar.