The Story of Legoiceking Furditore
A revised bio of my main character legoiceking :3 the story of legoiceking furditore lego was born from a fallen dogtaur angel named xavier. lego was split from his father as a type of revenge and ended up in the 1300s.
Terra Incognita - The Land Of The Unknown
Roland and reese nod in response.working their way to the perimeter fence they wait in some bushes and revise the plan. "we move in five" john relays to his team.the air became tense, tense with the fight looming over the horizon.
Married!
Afterwards, i'll go back through and do a major revision on the series. gotta get'em all ready for publication and such, y'know? lots of changes to be made, based on everyone's feedback! now...
After the Storm - Part 24 [The Visitors]
However, inspiration struck and i thought that i could improve the chapter, so i decided to revise it.
Study Break On The Beach...[Revised]
Quick note...orginally, when I submitted this story, over 75% of it, got cut in the process of the submission... T.T ....I was NOT a happy bear. Soooo, I had to re-write it from scratch...er at least the beach scene...which I acutally don't mind,...
See Me After Class
I made some extensive additions and some revisions to the story itself. --- the young cheetah burst into the bathroom and nearly tore off his jogging shorts.
In the Gorilla's Enclosure 1
She quickly gets into her uniform and rushes off, but doesn’t meet her manager, who switches the schedule for the revised one, which puts her at the penguin exhibit for poop duty while the gorillas are set to be out in the enclosure..
I'll Be Looking At The Moon
To withdraw into the den for a hard session of revising.
How It Goes - Theo's Tale
"don't worry about me, focus on your revision," scott says as he walks over to the bear. theo tilts his head as scott nuzzles his ear; he snatches scott's shirt by the collar and pulls him into a tender kiss.
Locks and Picks: Chapter 1: Making a splash.
A couple of notes before the story starts: 1) i am looking for a couple of revisers that can get the story back to me quickly, i had problems with revising this chapter this week and that was why this was delayed. 2) this will be an adult story, but there
House Guest - Sugar and Spice
#4 of house guest revised well, the revision of the first three chapters is over, so i present to you, after a year, the next all-new chapter of house guest. this story has adult situations, so minors should stop reading now.
Request - Nala's Corrupt Master (The Lion King Fanfiction)
After the final laws were revised, less than 20 lionesses were around for mating with, and even less were decent with their hunting skills. if a lioness would be disobedient, punishments were severe.