Follow Your Heart Or Your Head
It is a bit shorter than usual but i have decided not to do more than two character viewpoints per chapter from now on. i hope everyone enjoys and i look forward to all comments and critiques!
Intimacy (First Instalment)
I didn't just want to write more of the same, so after a lot of thought i've worked out a dual-viewpoint structure that i'm going to use, which allows me to give more of an insight into alec's mindset and into his and russ' relationship dynamic.
The Dragons of the Mountain, Chapter 1: Fangs and Claws
Normally his race can't reach such an impressive build: he represented an exception under many viewpoints. blizzard settled on the ground. "i'm sorry, master.
A Dragon's Awakening - Chapter 5
Climbing out of it, was a middle-aged man wearing, what appeared to be, very formal clothing, from shadow's viewpoint anyways. "mr. president, it's an honour to meet you.
Zion: Light of the New Moon, Ch 3.1, Doen
I offered an alternate viewpoint. "protecting the bloodline... and the family name, maybe." haldyn stated, "if he were that worried about bastards then he should just let me court some of the younger boys."
The Great Adventure Chapter 2
I wish nothing more than to die a good death at the hands of the enemy, but i must consider our other army members who do not hold our more dedicated viewpoint. leave me tafare, or raise your weapon and challenge me" tafare was visibly shaken.
Twin Thalocs
Twin viewpoints, alternating, blending, merging, they were one and yet two - amber eyes, silver eyes - black fur, white fur - and then she was one, not two, again.
Fur Spa
As if to assert this viewpoint, the raccoon's stomach gave a pitiful, needy gurgle. david put down his wallet on his desk. "sorry... i just..." he paused, trying to think of an excuse.
Splintered Light, Chapter 5.4: Point of View
#39 of splintered light we close out chapter 5 in ch 5.4 from the same viewpoint with which we started; calus remains the focus of the chapter for every single post! (yay!) after volunteering to try and teach mr.
The Night in Narnia - 3
As the fresh crowned queen departed from her viewpoint, the pain with all it's might rushed back into her spine and legs. susan bit her teeth together. only a few days ago she was in britain, and for the most time brooding over her schoolbooks.
Becoming your master (Story commission)
From smack’s viewpoint, beyond the agony of having his left leg completely crushed, torn from his body, and ground into the finest powder, he now felt his idol’s tongue pushing him back and forth.
The Dragonslayer
Even though he was on all fours, his viewpoint seemed higher than it had been before he'd entered the cave. "what did you do to me?"