Zebra In An Alleyway
feedback is appreciated. all credit goes to the artist. art is not owned by me. feedback is appreciated. zuhala was a hooker, who scored on average a hundred dicks every night. she destroyed the girth of their small dicks with her large ass.
Neo-Revolution
If i get mostly positive feedback i will post the next segment on memorial day, may 30th 2012. if the feedback is mostly negative, well i guess this will be the last segment that i put up.
Neo-Revolution
If i get mostly positive feedback i will post the next segment on memorial day, may 30th 2012. if the feedback is mostly negative, well i guess this will be the last segment that i put up.
Starfire the Lone Courier....Prologue
Do i just want to do a short thing...oh what's the word i am looking for \*thinking\*...............i guess prologue is the word i am looking for and if anyone likes it i may possibly consider doing a story so please if you are reading this i would love feedback
Mini Scene: A Lion, Vixen, and the Search for Better Scene Description
I'm looking to improve, so honest feedback is desired. my lion-y heart is decently strong, so don't feel like you need to hold back on critique. the room was bathed in a soft luminescent white light.
Commission Terms and Info
I will consider the midpoint draft feedback and editing phase to be closed once you send the second payment.
Pokémon: Phazon Purple, Patch Notes
I know very well about not letting too many cooks spoil the dinner (or however that saying goes), but i really would like to get as much fan feedback as i can get.
Somewhere Out There Act 20 - Drown
I'm irritated from the lack of feedback, and i'm just convinced right now that this will go completely unheard. completely unanswered. completely ignored. i post my stories on five different sites.
Second Opinions
It's friday again, and that means another chapter - thank you for your feedback on the latest chapter, it was a pleasure to read your thoughts on the piece, and i hope you'll give equally plentiful feedback on today's chapter as well!
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
Ultimately, the best way to spot whether you're telling or showing too much is by trusting the feedback from your readers.
The Mook Maker, Chapter 37: Each To Their Own
The power feedback insisted i should, i must. "we are letting them escape, as you ordered, master." miwah said, more conscious of my own plans than i was momentarily. "thank you."
To the Palace - Prologue
feedback is good for the soul! :)_ \*\*\*\*\* having forgotten her name in the few months since her capture, the once proud wolven woman was now reduced to answering only to her number: "13."