Enemy, Chapter 1
#1 of enemy chapter 1 "to any ship in range of this message: my name is ensign nathanial hopewell. i'm the executive officer of the ils freighter nuara.
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#22 of in the enemy's territory i'll be honest. this didn't come out the way i hoped. but, i'm tired of fiddling with it. i'm gonna have to do a major chapter restructuring for the final product anyway, so just have this for now.
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#21 of in the enemy's territory things might be looking up, but there's still a long slope to climb. this chapter came together pretty quick, all things considering.
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#20 of in the enemy's territory there's trouble brewing in paradise. i had to take a huge chunk out of this chapter. it was just too dang long, so a good chunk of the end was removed and going into the next chapter.
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#24 of in the enemy's territory it's the end of the world as we know it. it's the end of the world as we know it. and i feel... very sad to say goodbye, honestly. there's gonna be an epilogue, yeah, but that's just a narration.
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#23 of in the enemy's territory let me tell you a story before the story. the scene in the middle with the pups was inspired by my encounter long ago with a tiny baby squirrel.
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Makes 'em real mean ta be enemies, but real friendly when the humans gave up. brought humans ta a new enlightenment an' gave 'em the ability ta go ta other worlds.
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#14 of in the enemy's territory aww, anubis is such a softie. i worked really really hard on this chapter. this conversation between the boys went through no less than 200 individual changes, and that's not just grammar or a word here and there.
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#13 of in the enemy's territory let's have some happy fun times while i keep hunting for this heart wrenching knife of mine... i swear it's around here somewhere.... it took anubis entirely too long to realize that the world wasn't upside down.
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#12 of in the enemy's territory oh boy, anubis. just breakin em down, one by one. the storm may have blown through, but there's a lot of pieces to pick up, and wounds don't just vanish. the next day started as the others.
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#11 of in the enemy's territory well, most of the heavy content is out of the way now. ahem, most. there's bound to be one last one, then it's all uphill from there. for now, here's a little sprinkling of it all for your troubles.
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#10 of in the enemy's territory in war, there are all kinds of victims. there's the many shades of gray, but there's also heaven and hell, and sometimes the difference is unexpected.