Deep Space - Chapter 5, Mission Accomplished
#5 of solaria chronicles enjoy and do leave feedback, it actually allows me to become a better writer, which in turn gives you better stories to read. you know, if you don't just realize there's other writers. again, enjoy and leave feedback!
Never Been to Me
Thank you for all your comments, your feedback is always much appreciated. again, my thanks go to [ und euer feedback. ob ich noch irgendwas verbessern soll oder ob es (bisher) gut so ist wie es ist. freue mich auf euer feedback mumble
Breeding Bitch
((okay... not my best work... and probably going to get a lot of harsh feedback... but... any actual constructive feedback would be much appreciated... sorry this is so short...))
Guess What I’ve Got!!!
I always value your feedback, and it seems that there has been a decreasing trend recently - i do hope that you'll take the time to comment, since your feedback is the only thing i receive in compensation for writing.
Alphabet Challenge 2018 - V is for Virtual Reality
He wanted to experience all that the full feedback vr system had to offer. but, shakal was still a rather competitive person, and he didn't just want to test the game for his employees. the panther wanted to _win_.
Rising Power - Chapter 5, A gift from the King
#5 of ebony chronicles enjoy and do leave feedback, it actually allows me to become a better writer, which in turn gives you better stories to read. you know, if you don't just realize there's other writers. again, enjoy and leave feedback!
Michael's Story- Prologue
All feedback is welcome! -lupus sanctus
The Hunter's Choice Chapter One: Young Blood
Again as i said before this is my first story and i would like feedback good and bad but please be gentle with the bad feedback but yes i will update with chapter two when i get enough time but for those who do tea this first chapter and like it i promise
The Lusty Dragon
But he knew he would always wander alleyways, trying again to find that lusty dragon. \_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_\_ there it is folks, please leave some feedback^^