Jacketed Desires
As always comments, critique, and suggestions are welcome. "there we go. should be nice and snug," lewis said as he tightened the final strap.ben gave a few tugs at the sleeves of his straitjacket to confirm.
Not Quite as Planned 2
If you want help with writing, brainstorming, thoughts, ideas, critique, there are a lot of wonderful people to help out and talk to! i know it's a short read, but if you like it, leave a comment below!
Its Good To Be Top Dawg (NEW RAUNCHINESS AND EDITS!!!)
I dont need critique, it was rushed just for fun. was feeling horny and getting my fantasy it out on paper was an amazing experience. enjoy!!! now onto alpha hyena bangs bitch fox the room smelled of musk and man. mating and alpha.
Airy Thoughts
For once, that voice of critique from inside of her had no retort, and aqua sat back smugly. her hand stroked the curve of her tummy. that nexus of doubt had come from somewhere, after all.
Puppy Love Chapter One
I have no idea how it will end, so any ideas, comments, and critiques are welcome. flames will be laughed at and discarded. i guess it all started about six years ago while my father was pastor of the mount olive family church.
Chosen (Part 1)
Anyways, i hope you comment, critiqueing anything you see fit and i hope you like it :) part 2 will explain so much!
Alone
#1 of grounded hey everyone, this is my first attempt at writing for this site, so please be nice :3 all critiques of this story (if polite) will be met with the utmost enthusiasm. thankies!
The Anthro Virus: The Start of Something New
Please comment and critique! rip the shit out of it if you need to i want to get better so tell me how i'm doing. the hallway was damp and dark, as two large and heavily armed men led a much smaller figure through the corridor.
The Tale of Rikama (Working Title)
Constructive critique is both appreciated and encouraged, and vice-versa. our story opens up on korotti prime, named for its first sentient inhabitants. a name which it still carried proudly, unto its desstruction.
The Life of a Maiden
As always comments, critique, and suggestions are welcome. the life of a maidenby r.s. warrenaxel examined himself in the large mirror his captor had placed him before. not that he had much choice as he had been tied up in that spot, unable to leave.
The Lion and the Gazelle: Caged
Comments, critiques and the like are welcomed (just try and be polite about it, thanks.) he walked into the club at the apex of the night's festivities. his cool head and meticulously coiffed hair swimming in the smell of sweat and arousal.
..... Runs In The Family (Reference Sheet)
Please offer critiquing and suggestions. it is sort of the main continuation of brother's done dirty, although that story will become separate from this series.