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Feedback
And i think i can help ya out with providing some feedback, too! there's definitely a lot of ways this thing can be made better, heck, with a little more experimentation i'll bet we could help them really improve their design!"
Zombie story - ROUGH DRAFT - Please leave feedback
This hasn't really been proofread or checked meticulously, it's mostly just here to get feedback on my writing style, not details or what you think of characters or whatnot.
How does everyone feel about my stories?
I guess i just want some feedback. i don't get a lot of comments on my stories, and i'd really like to know what people are thinking about my stuff. i like to imagine that i'm doing just fine, but it's hard to really be sure, ya know?
Gargoyles: Clan of the South- Part 2
feedback is greatly desired. this is the raw un edited version, and is subject to updates. the sun descended on the horizon. as night fell on the manhattan skyline the gargoyles woke from their stone sleep.
Gargoyles: Clan of the South- Part 1
feedback requested. this story is subject to being edited he landed in a darkened alleyway, his wings aching from the amount of gliding he just did. he wasn't tired but his breath sounded loud to his own ears.
A small update
Hello Everyone, I haven't been writing much lately due to the fact it's hockey season and I'm juggling that plus work amongst other more mundane real-life obligations. My pet rabbit also recently died so I just got over that little emotional trauma....
Feedback Loop
The scent, her male appearance and the way it works are all perfect conditions for a feedback loop of pure horniness.
Immersion and Feedback
Agatha let her door close with a slam and unceremoniously dropped her bag to the floor. The tension in her shoulders drained in an apathetic slump, and she tossed her head back in a lengthy sigh. The vixen stood in entrance of her apartment and put a...
New Found Feedback
#18 of new found form new found feedback by von krieger mai's straw made a horrendous noise as she sought the last few drops from the bottom of her smooth cup.
Blood and Shadow- Chapter 2
Without another word Hybrin stepped out of the tent, leaving the women to the task of bathing, and dressing the newly liberated feline. Night had already begun to fall and the temperature was rapidly dropping. Hybrin could feel the cold wisps of wind...
Blood and Shadow- Chapter 1
The blazing noon sun on the scorching hot sand made the dry heat of the desert even more unbearable. He may have had white fur to reflect the sun's rays but his thick under coat was not helping. Hybrin would much rather be on the slopes of snow-capped...