Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 8 - The Darkness within...
He was choking, the impact severely damaged his chest, having critical consequences on the flareons breathing. revy didn't hesitate or think, she simply ran to help. "bull! are you alright?!!" she asked. the flareon couldn't answer.
The True And Potent SECRETS of SoFurry Story Formatting
_** preparing text for publication on sofurry is a process, and the only critical part to that process is starting off with text formatted in some way not friendly to sofurry's simple web editing entry box.
Dak's Day.
This is my first attempt at a yiff ever so pleeease be gentle but constructive criticism never hurt anyone, right? normal disclaimer stuff, gotta be 18 or older to read this whatever.... on to the story!
Counter Earth Chronicles Dual Realities Chapter 20: When The Very Thing You Are Looking For Is The One Thing You Can’t Find
Counter Earth Chronicles - Dual Realities **Chapter 20:** **When The Very Thing You Are Looking For Is The One Thing You Can't Find.** April 7th YOE 35 7:22 PM Castle Wundagore, World One (Counter Earth) The hub news was dominated by the...
A Different Kind of Wet Dream
Please leave constructive criticism in the comments to help in bettering my stories.** ** ** **a different kind of wet dream** ** ** _wet, why is it that in most of my dreams i feel wet?
Can a Band-Aid Fix A Reactor Leak?
'critical' meant that the reactor was producing enough energy to sustain itself, 'super critical' meant that the amount of energy it was creating was going up. 'prompt critical' meant bad things. very bad things.
Two Worlds Collide - Prologue
Suggestions and constructive criticisms are welcome. destructive criticisms are not. edit - 4/14/12 - there is an in progress edit of this story, to be updated in the summer.
Writing Tips vol. 2
Don't rage against your critics! it accomplishes nothing except making you look like a huge douche who just rolled up in his douche-mobile and exposed his doucheness.
A Long Sought Release
They were both very skilled at the game so they had it on the hardest difficulty, but without focus kaden died early and kept missing critical shots.
At Arceus' Behest Ch. 00 - Prologue
Ragnarok is reaching critical speed! if it gets any faster i won't be able to get a lock on you! hurry!" dr. weil's voice suddenly jammed the transmission, "no... this isn't over yet!" he suddenly appeared from a floor cave-in.
The end of Innocence
Age: 18 authors notes: this is my first work of furry fiction, so please give me some helpful criticism. thank you for reading! ~ william glanced at the report card, a row of f's and d's stared at him.
Smuggling Parasites, Chapter 1
I am very open to all kinds of criticism, feel free to share your thoughts of the story, characters, annoying grammar mistakes or maybe even suggest some future themes or story direction. this story is based off the parasites i designed.