Kyurex (Pokemon): Part 8 - The Darkness within...
He was choking, the impact severely damaged his chest, having critical consequences on the flareons breathing. revy didn't hesitate or think, she simply ran to help. "bull! are you alright?!!" she asked. the flareon couldn't answer.
Dak's Day.
This is my first attempt at a yiff ever so pleeease be gentle but constructive criticism never hurt anyone, right? normal disclaimer stuff, gotta be 18 or older to read this whatever.... on to the story!
The True And Potent SECRETS of SoFurry Story Formatting
_** preparing text for publication on sofurry is a process, and the only critical part to that process is starting off with text formatted in some way not friendly to sofurry's simple web editing entry box.
A Different Kind of Wet Dream
Please leave constructive criticism in the comments to help in bettering my stories.** ** ** **a different kind of wet dream** ** ** _wet, why is it that in most of my dreams i feel wet?
Can a Band-Aid Fix A Reactor Leak?
'critical' meant that the reactor was producing enough energy to sustain itself, 'super critical' meant that the amount of energy it was creating was going up. 'prompt critical' meant bad things. very bad things.
Two Worlds Collide - Prologue
Suggestions and constructive criticisms are welcome. destructive criticisms are not. edit - 4/14/12 - there is an in progress edit of this story, to be updated in the summer.
Writing Tips vol. 2
Don't rage against your critics! it accomplishes nothing except making you look like a huge douche who just rolled up in his douche-mobile and exposed his doucheness.
A Long Sought Release
They were both very skilled at the game so they had it on the hardest difficulty, but without focus kaden died early and kept missing critical shots.
At Arceus' Behest Ch. 00 - Prologue
Ragnarok is reaching critical speed! if it gets any faster i won't be able to get a lock on you! hurry!" dr. weil's voice suddenly jammed the transmission, "no... this isn't over yet!" he suddenly appeared from a floor cave-in.
The end of Innocence
Age: 18 authors notes: this is my first work of furry fiction, so please give me some helpful criticism. thank you for reading! ~ william glanced at the report card, a row of f's and d's stared at him.
Muscle Growth Game - Public Alpha Test v0.07
- critical testing needed @ casino slot machines \*\*\* bunch of new stuff including (but not limited to) hairstyles, body hair options, the casinoooo (just slot machines for now), a bdsm tent in the carnival, the carnival pink tent event, irongard city
Morsel
A critic was the job carl had which lead to all the owners of the spots he liked, both big and small, to give him all the goodies he could handle - with a tempting price that grew him to a greater width.