My Guardian Demons - Part 1
They didn't command me to do things, or criticize my every action, but seemed to be content with forming a sort of commentary track to everything i did.
Underwater Defender
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Chapter One
Hey guys this is my first work on here and i have not done creative writing in two years (i've been doing argumentative and analysis essays for my ap classes) so i would really enjoy it if you guys would criticize me and don't be nice i need someone like simon
It's So Easy
For the second time that night, paul had presumed to know something, and had been completely wrong... one time so horribly judgmental of another person, and then, the second time, so overtly critical of how he expected to be judged.
Past to Present
"father hired you to help me and teach me... but i don't need a critic... i need a friend."
30- Shattering Masks and Glasses
Yet by the time she had reached the top step, syrra had set aside her internal criticism and bowed with iaora, keeping her eyes low. "matriarch bast," she intoned evenly.
GRUESOMENESS TEST
Any and all criticism is appreciated. it does contain a very detailed crime scene where basically a fur was completely disassembled. it contains blood and other grossness. you've been warned!
The great wolves V
By the time this is uploaded the prior 4 chapters are probably not reviewed yet so there was no chance for me to get criticism on the whole construct - i will try to use criticism to improve as soon as it starts coming.
"Family Tails" - Epilogue
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Slave Camp - Evening Wears On
Master gowns proceeded to walk through the room, criticizing the males' efforts and the females' choices, but not making any alterations.
Chakai OC info
Any advice and constructive criticism welcome. background chakai is an open source ai. available as a free download on a website with hundreds of other ais. the reason there are so many different ais is due to the limitations put on them by law.
Chapter 34: Meetings with The Armor Evolution.
I thank you for those who participate and i do accept any critics and/or comments to my bad writing skills and many more (lol). thank you.