Blue Dragon Story Commissions Open
If you don't like something that i have written then let me know and i will work to change/fix certain elements, however, if you tell me that you just don't like the idea and ask me to rewrite an entire story then you will be blocked.
Isolation-Excerpt 31- The Situation Worsens
"no luck", tyler said as he entered the lounge with sarah, "i tried everything from a simple security switch to a complete soft and firmware rewrite, martin still controls al's exo."
Longing: Chapter 6
Well,â i spent a lot of time rewriting and rewriting parts, trying to come up with the best way to describe what i am seeing in my head.
Chapter 1 - Oooh, Shiny.
#1 of lawrence's lament rewrite. the rewrite of the side story i woke up again in cold sweats panting. another nightmare fading from my mind slowly, his handsome face sleeping soundly in my mind as he vanished from my sight.
Prologue: Primary Sources
#1 of the griffon of paradise: the full account a complete rewrite and expansion of the one-shot smut fic "griffon in paradise," this erotic adventure details gilda's survival of a shipwreck, and her new life upon a mysterious tropical island.
A Trip in the Woods
Spent some time adding onto it and rewriting it. really looking for any feedback or critique. i know my writing is rusty, seriously need other eyes on my works.
The Journal: Spira, Chapter 2
#1 of the journal okay i'm back rewriting the story. it may be shorter than most but i'm wrting until i reach a good cliff-hanger to leave you on. enjoy!
Something is wrong in the world today. Part 2
This part i had to do all on my own, leafykins didn't want to rewrite it with me. but it is all well and good. i had fun retyping this up. oh ya just to give you guys' heads up on a few things. 1. when a dragon cries he will die. 2.
Ren, the History Major Fox in the Future
The notepad ren had brought stayed for the most part empty of notes, and when he did take notes they mostly involved rewriting really wordy statements down into one or two words.
388 The Terrible Thing
The field effect device goes off, and weird blue electrical discharges like lightning begin to play around the blackness of his armoured scutes as his own temporal integrity begins to clash with the field cast out by the device as it destroys itself above, rewriting
Hunting Death- First One
If i were to rewrite some of the later dialogs i'd probably bring back more of that **first one** "ugh, that was certainly fun," i remark dryly to myself while considering my options. making a bolt for it would do me no good.
Chapter 3
Not horribly happy with the pacing, but one of these days i may get around to rewriting it. they arrived at the castle at the end of the second week.