The cat without a home (Part 4)
I hope you enjoy and please comment and give me critique if you like. also, requests are always welcome just send me a pm, note, or whatever you like.
Uncomfortably Happy [1]
critiques are always welcome. enjoy. i didn't know what to do for cover art so here are some colored squares. enjoy. warning: furries, homosexual relationships, uncomfortable first times, did i mention furries? are you over 18? no?
Spyro: Return of Darkness, Chapter 11 -- Eternity Begins Today
I'll get chapter 12 up very soon, but in the meantime, leave comments/critiques! i might put up a revised version of this, who knows...
Self Discovery
I am particularly interested in the critique' of fems on this story. but any will due.
Dad's Love: Ch 3 Forever Nick and Joe
Please leave critiquing comments :) warning: 18+ naughty stuff the air was thick, musky, and hot. nick groaned, hugging his thick white sheets to his naked crotch with his legs.
Grooming Session
. * * * _comments and critique welcome; tell me what you think!_
Glory Days
As always, critique is welcome. griff studied his reflection in the side of the side of the beer glass. a black wolf looked back at him, green eyes studying his fur. he pointed out his jaw to examine his chin.
Summer with Leomon: An Affair
Please give me your critique so far on the story. hope you all liked this chapter and the next one will be up probably next weekend.
Spilling the tea
Anyway i hope you enjoy it and i'd love to hear any critique or ideas for future stories i spend time on rather then projects that are due soon!
What Had To Be Done
This was my first story, critique of all kinds would be appreciated and i hope you enjoyed :)
Out in the country
Remember to comment and critique.
Puppy Love Chapter 3
I have no idea how it will end, so any ideas, comments, and critiques are welcome. flames will be laughed at and discarded._ the next morning i pulled my bike out of the garage and put my helmet on.