The Man With No Face.....
** **debate/love/stalk/critique!** **moncheli!**
A Rough Post-workout Session
critiques and comments appreciated. "whoo, i'm spent," sakarie huffed as the pair recovered from their morning jog. the snow leopard stretching against the wall of his friend's apartment.
The Brood - Chapter 3
critique is most welcome! chapter three the rest of the evening i spent all day with chloe ordering things and sitting in the den. for some reason all that had happened felt completely natural and it filled me with a strange sense of joy.
Just another furry love story
Id love to hear feedback or critique since this is my first time writing this type of story. i hope you enjoy this and ill be glad to keep writing this story. again, enjoy :) just another furry love story.
Study Break
Please leave a comment or critique, both are appreciated! :3 "ugh! i cant look at this any longer!" kiana scooted her chair back from the table. her psych exam was coming up, but she could only study so much.
The Sexual Adventures of A & J Hampton, Prologue: Two days before our first meating
And anyone who critiques this story. love you all! a & j
The fight of a Knight
Comments, critiques and the like would be appreciated since this is a style of writing (writing about battles and fights) that i'm not used to at all. ~~~ it happened in a flash, a large psi lash out that hit like the barrage of bullets on the
Tony's Room - Kisses
More stories on the way, :3 and thanks to all of you who have taken the time to comment, rate, and critique my chapters. it helps me greatly and i thank you all for it.
A War To Remember: Chapter One
I'd gladly take any constructive critique. (except the bashing kind, no one likes to be bashed.) i'm native in german and english but i'd like to get my english back on track. sentences might end up longer than they should, grammar might be a little off.
Untitled - Prologue (WIP?)
Leave me a critique or a shout and let me know what you think of it! - aniro **_prologue_** "where am i?" that was the first thought of the creature lying in the forest, laying about amongst the throngs of branches that lined the thick brush.
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which Insatisfaction Plagues Donichus
All comments, critiques, and criticisms are welcome.** with donichus giving up the only life he'd come to know well for the past twenty years, the two found little reason to continue their nomadic journey to nowhere in particular.
The Pack's Beginnings
First story, don't critique the author's notes, ok? just skip 'em if you want. just know that this is the first of my stories on this website.