Bound to Please : Part 2
The story was also in poor taste, but siaru had other issues to take care of rather than critique some poor metaphors. he felt her spank his rear again, her grip tightening as she squeezed a cheek as if judging his body.
School Milk
A hastily made potion for keine has some unexpected consequences~ if anyone's out there reading this i would really appreciate it if someone could critique this a bit and pick out any errors that are still there.
The Sailor and the Farmer
As always with everything i write, critique is always appreciated, also for whatever reason sofurry has kind of screwed up the formatting... so that part isn't my fault the sailor and the farmer night had fallen over the port village of sandstone.
Fursonalized, Chapter 2 - A Whole New World
As before, critiques are welcomed. this is the last bit of the valentine's day gift section of the story.
Feyrahl, SF Ch 3.2
The comments seemed mostly directed at himself, but the human didn't mind getting the lion's perspective so he simply listened to khosk gripe and critique.
young hearts
This is my first story so critique is welcome and please post your comments. ;) todd slammed down on the alarm clock. he slowly started to rub the sleep from his eye's but he felt something wrong with his face.
The Rogue's Drake
Read, critique, or comment. anything works, but if you really want to make this kitty happy, do all of them. more comments=better motivation=better and faster uploads!** **\*\*\*** arys crouched under one of the keep's windows.
The Hypno Bunny ( Part 2)
I hope you enjoy it, im always open for critique as a new writer. again enjoy this, part 3 will come soon enough!
Well That Escalated Quickly...
Comments, critiques and the like are fine / endorsed, i want to try to get better at writing. image © r3drunner on ib, original here ylenia © romio on ib, ref-sheet here story © furriffic (my ib) well that escalated quickly..
Unintended Intruder - 08
I can't promise not to critique, though.""that would be awesome," terry managed to say as he laughed. "i don't think abby's into voyeurism, though.""you should ask her," marcy told him with a sly look in her eyes that knew things he did not.
A Fateful Fall Encounter
P-please respond (with critique, preferably). it was a peaceful autumn evening at the park. children exhausted from a long day of playing in the leaves were taken back home by their mothers.
Chapter 1 - Sassafras and Cinders
critiques and comments welcome. ma would used to tell me: _don't be special._ it was ok to be creative or unique, but not special. you know the kind right? the sort that makes you stick out like an apple among oranges, ya?