Thanks to ib: blackraven2 for proof reading
#1
"ordo postulat pengu pisces, ordo postulat pengu pisces,ordo postulat pengu pisces..."
the chant filled the hall as several rows of penguins in black robes repeated it while waiting.
Male, Order_of_pengu, Penguin, Phoenix, cult
I've been working at it for some time, and several chapters are complete but in need of proof reading and editing before i consider them worthy of being posted. this is a series i will not be making compromises for.
Action, Death, Dragon, Drama, Fiction, Fighting, Fox, Isiat, Kyruku, Love, M/F, Military, Modern, Multiple Species, Preview, Sad, Shadi, Story, Story Series, Tragedy, Violence (Not In Yiff), War, slice of life, teaser
Any tips will be appreciated, it is non-edited and if anyone would like to proof read any of my future work it will be much appreciated.
cheers!
muse
"time to go to bed kate."
Clean, Cub, Story, fairy-tale
And she was going to partake in it to the fullest
thanks to a friend who gave me some hints and after proof reading it some myself. i give you this second edition to enjoy and hopefully spot any errors i could fix to make it even better story.
Anal, Bondage, Bound, Gang-Rape, Interbreeding, M/F/F, Rape
Thanks to solipsisticnarcissistic, sonkenishen, tempo, tekki, masterfox221 and karlamon for editing and proof-reading of this and soon to be posted chapters!
extra thanks to solipsisticnarcissistic for support and continues feedback!
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Bolt, Disney, Fanfiction, Female, Feral, Introduction, Labrador, Landscape, Male, Mittens, Mystic, Paw, Plot Development, Prologue, Quadruped, Rhino, Series, Short, Short Story, Story Progression, Story Series, Suspense, White Shepherd
#3 of a nightmare
**a furry's nightmare: chapter 3**
thank you to my friend who proof read this chapter for me.
the birds were chirping and the sun was shining.
Abuse, Adolescent, Adventure, Angel dragon, Anthro, Anthropomorphic, Aqua, Blood, Canine, Cat, Character Development, Death, Dreams, Evil, Family, Folvos Silverpaw, Friendship, Fursona, Gore, Gun, Jackal, Long, Losses, Mild Violence, Pain, Polybius Cybercat, Polytechnica Zephilyber, Psycological, Sad, Science Fiction, Story Progression, Story Series, Teen, Violence (Not In Yiff), Wolf, Wolf Dog, Young, spiritual
Edit: errors... should write, wait a day, and proof read these. :t
edit #2: might take some more time to plan this out. was going to wing it for most things but... yeah.
long ago, there was a world.
Boy, Female, Human, Prologue, Promise, fate, kid
I'm sure there are some editing mistakes in this chapter...i'm not that great with proof reading. :-(
farfar is my character. the others are figments of my over zealous imagination! comments and compliments are welcomed!
early evening on friday.
Corgi, Friendship, German Shepherd, No-Yiff
#16 of kyurex
well im posting again...this time it wasn't proof read because i'm such a selfish bu...
well im posting again...this time it wasn't proof read because i'm such a selfish bum and vicousreader is a little busy at the moment.
Adventure, Character Development, M/F, Ninetales, Pokemon, Romance, Series, Story Progression, Teenagers, Umbreon, Young Love, jealousy, mightyena
By brown\_wantholf
beta, proof read by;
shnurui
and edited by;
shnurui
(note from the editor: the sinuous material is usually turned into thread, and the not immediately edible parts are dried over a slow fire for jerky.)
BDSM, Bondage, Coooking, Forced Sex, M/F, Sheep, Slavery, Torture, Wolf, murder
This one took some time to read, write, and proof read because of my work being a jerk. they are giving me over time so i was being over worked and my muse was being abused while i was working.
Anthropomorphic, Jackal, Mantis, Multiple Species, No-Yiff, Office, Plot Development, Robot, Spider, Straight