The Backgrounds
Why it is called the special lovers in this chapter/segment. whenever you see these " " it is either a passage of time or the next little segment or me starting on a new part of the story. you all are going to hate me for the end, as always reveiws & critisism
Strait from the Sales Block
Any comments and critisism are appreciated and i appollogise in advance for spelling errors and grammer. 'take your pick! any sex, any age! we have it all! if i'm lying my hat is ten feet tall!
Sometimes Dead is Better Chapter 1
I want critisism... and ideas for my next story e\_e i already have ideas but i want moar. sorry for the lack of sex and the blackout. you see im working on writing smut but i just can't do it good. im a serious fantasy writer :p
Nezoroth Chapter 2: Trial by Fire
Please rate and comment, i could use the critisism. nezoroth 2: trial by fire saz blinked. then reared back, dropping the still half stunned micro drake to the ground. "why, you little bastard."
The House Dahan
So this beeing my first story of any kind ever, i'm expecting many of the more experienced writers (i.e. anyone with at least two stories) might be able to provide some constructive critisism, please do so.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 1 – A Bond Strengthened
Any and all constructive critisism, comments and suggestions are greatly appreciated. i hope you all enjoy reading what i have put together.
Over in that Meadow ( chapter 1, New Friends and Lion Eyes)
( please read and tell me what you think, i love constructive critisism!) fire surrounded them as griffin cried over the wounded body of her friend, ash. oh ash, so kind, so wonderful, the only person who ever befriended griffin.
Chapter 1 Promises - The Start
Hence kuro couldn't bring himself to despise the old fox. and for that had been critisized by the old fox, continuosly referred to as weak, and too emotional.
PH-5
Be they praise, or (keep it constructive please) critisism. "the planet ph-5. a fertile land full of lush vegetation and wild animals. it's no wonder that a school of wildlife research was built here to monitor and study the flora and fauna.
Runaway Hostel Chapter 1
I won't mind some constructive critisism :3_ _anyways, i delay_ _you long enough. enjoy!
An Act of Kindness
He shouted well, hope you enjoyed it ^^ .......and i'd really like feedback from my readers, tell me what you thought =3 .........all forms of critisism will be taken into consideration xd .......thanks
chaos_monster and blacksun: predator and prey
Blasksun... you have to be eighteen or older... hell you won't even get the beauty if your not.. so if your to young.. go watch tv.. mtv2 might just show a boob... for those who can enjoy this.. well enjoy i took alot of thought writing this so constructive critisism