24: Falling Embers
Las lindas web comic spin-off, oc-insert the characters in this story (except the oc-insert) are © chalodillo **chapter 24: falling embers** **beta-reader: ant0nius** **warning: a bit of graphic violence.** ambar knew something was about to happen here
Secret Sanctuary Fun
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In Darkness, Every Rose Is Black - Chapter 02
It has had more passes than i can count, and i've spent a lot of time with beta readers, honing the story to become as good as i can make it.
In Darkness, Every Rose Is Black - Chapter 01
It has had more passes than i can count, and i've spent a lot of time with beta readers, honing the story to become as good as i can make it.
Integration: Part Eight
Anyone in the channel has the option to be a beta reader and in there you can poke and yell at me to stop being lazy! http://irc.bigfurs.com/?
Princess and the Dragon 1
Also many thanks to [mirnehviir](https://mirnehviir.sofurry.com/) for fixing the mistakes in this chapter. he is not my beta reader.
Princess and the Dragon 5
#5 of princess and the dragon well chapter 5 is here and i made it (a bit) longer for you people, have a merry merry christmas and of course many thanks to my beta reader https://mirnehviir.sofurry.com/ .
The Vulpine Smile: Revamped Chapter 1
I would also like to acknowledge the assistance of my new beta reader, thegoldenunicorn, for helping me iron out a few plot wrinkles and unintentional awkward moments.
Chris pokerotic adventure
Most of the beta readers are useless and my microsoft word is buggered. hello everybody my name is christopher goudie but you can call me chris i'm a 16 year old boy.
Nathan's Story
I don't have a beta reader, so this is solo. closest thing i have to a beta is a friend who told me they liked the first chapter. please, give me any feedback you can. i want to improve this as much as i can.
Division 42, Ch. 5: Sibling Rivalry
Special thanks goes out to dash: my beta reader for this... he fixed it up and i finetuned it here and there, so it can flow nicely... next up on the agenda is.... "how cliche" - my collab with jake shadow wolf...