Confusion
Note: this is my first story so please comment and tell me how it is ;) oh and please don't tell me it sucks i already know that \*\*\* before the move: zen was a 16 year old snow leopard standing about 5'7" with a brown eye and a silver eye, he didn't
Julia's Discovery
\*this is my first story, so tell me what you think! keep waiting for part 2!\*
(this story still needs a name)
This is my first atempt at my first story this is my first attempt at my first story feal free to give me pointers and help and pm me with what you think original character sabor male 16 years old, scales change color when he wants to can move
Fav Teacher: Chapter 1
This is my first story so i hope ya like it. if at least one person likes it i will continue the story.
The Park
"as long as you boys don't mind sharing just one bone~" -- this was my first story ever!
The Minotaur's Master
One of the first stories that he had heard as a child was the story of theseus and the minotaur, he was profoundly interested by the mythical beast.
The Hunter's Choice Chapter One: Young Blood
Ok well this is my first story so please let me know how i am doing if you have anything that you would like me to know please pm me.
- Celesteon, the Apprentice of Light - Prologue Part 1
This is the first story i have ever written, so i can understand that there might be some grammatical errors and spelling issues as well as some repetition. please comment and tell me what could be worked on.
A private Moment
Like i said. first story. i'd like to subit more. so please. leave a comment. help me improve my writing so that the next one will be more enjoyable. thanks.
Life's Pains (intro)
I'll post my first story either tommorow or sunday. bye guys!
Peripetia
#1 of champion of the universe after reading many wonderful stories by awesome authors on this site, i have decided to write my first story!
Sisterly Love
My first story posted here, two sisters are at home alone and one gets caught in the others trap. this is my first story so please be gentle! >.< a very special thanks to hetzer for helping me reedit this!