A small town welcome
Interested in readers opinions so please leave a comment, critique, complement, insults, just go for it. and seriously, if someone has a title name idea let me know. pt.1 \*thunk\* the locker room door closes.
Guilty Love (Hyena (m) x Human (m) gay)
For a second he thinks about how many artists have probably looked at his art in this gallery and had criticisms and critiques for his work as well.
Family Days 14
He would cook something at his house and mary would do the same and then they would switch meals and critique one another: even if at first mary had done nothing but critiqued him.
Hi, I'm Bunni Ver 2.0
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The Epitaph of A Living Man
I am displaying it here not for critique, not for ridicule, hell, not even for self-satisfaction. i am only displaying it here because it gives me a sort of 'settling' feeling of calm, being honest like this.
Everything Or Nothing cap 4 -Questions and Concerns
#5 of everything or nothing its done, phew , comments and critiques are veary welcomed ! :) "so what did you want to talk about, doc?" jorek said whit a raised eyebrow, his tone light and friendly.
Chains of the Soul, First Link
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Legal Limits 3: Happy Birthday Conan...
I wish i could talk to you and hear that sweet voice, wish we could watch movies or youtube and critique things as we go along, wish i could hear about your day...
Depravity - Zion
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Family Reunion
As always critique is welcome. another night, and another sore trip home. working the night shift at a factory job wasn't really as easy as reese had hoped. after all the years of staying up until four in the morning playing various games online...
Lewd times with Jolteon
critiques are welcome. jolteon's saliva tingled sweetly like toothache plant, like my gums had been scrubbed with sugar. i swallowed, and the shock made my throat seize up; jolteon's tongue grazed my cheek as i jerked away.
Rubber Wolf Paradise
Now i know that others are reading this story and saying thank god it's not a text brick any more, my sincerest apologies in dropping my stories on here without editing and with that if there are any more critiques i would be happy to try and oblige