Their Echoes
This is a first and feel free to critique, give feedback and tell me what you think! thank you for checking out this story, i hope you enjoy it. the snow leopard's ears flicked along to the beat to the old clock.
"Wolf Boy" a Fantasy Novel
All feedback and critique are welcome as the story itself is still quite young in its development and will most likely change quite a bit by the time i feel content with it."
Sub & Dom
Once again, critiques are welcome.
Morning Fun
I would appreciate constructive criticism/ critique only. morning fun ben the black and white furred husky woke up to the ringing of his alarm clock on his phone.
Tracks
Any and all critique is appreciated, just please be respectful. the snow fell quickly enough to cover his tracks just after he made them. he had a sword sheathed on his back and was bundled up in wool to keep warm.
..... Runs In The Family (Reference Sheet)
Please offer critiquing and suggestions. it is sort of the main continuation of brother's done dirty, although that story will become separate from this series.
Long John
This story is, i will warn you, rather political/social critique heavy. please be aware of that. if political/social stuff is a turnoff you may prefer not to read it. that said, comment and critique welcome and i hope you enjoy!
Avian: A web serial
So yeah, i hope you all enjoy and please leave your critiques! alright, my first day of writing in this thing... hm, i really can't say that i know what to write.
Alex's Turn
Postamble(); comment+critique please. comments=better/more stories and critiques=better quality
Pride
critiques would be nice, but refrain from flaming please. even if the sun faded or the sky cracked, or even if the earth shook with such a crushing rage, i will always be with you.
Muscle Growth - The Quest for More
In either case, please note that since this is my first ever foray into the field, i will **greatly** appreciate any and all forms of comments, critique, and suggestions.
Around the Bonfire
Life is dull, and boring, and each day passes slower than the previous for daniel, until an acidic critique on a story he has read stirs his attention.