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#18 of in the enemy's territory what can i say about this chapter, other than... it took too freakin long! if i named my chapters, i'd call this one "the howling." it would not allow itself to be finished until there was some damn howling!
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#22 of in the enemy's territory i'll be honest. this didn't come out the way i hoped. but, i'm tired of fiddling with it. i'm gonna have to do a major chapter restructuring for the final product anyway, so just have this for now.
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Makes 'em real mean ta be enemies, but real friendly when the humans gave up. brought humans ta a new enlightenment an' gave 'em the ability ta go ta other worlds.
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#14 of in the enemy's territory aww, anubis is such a softie. i worked really really hard on this chapter. this conversation between the boys went through no less than 200 individual changes, and that's not just grammar or a word here and there.
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#13 of in the enemy's territory let's have some happy fun times while i keep hunting for this heart wrenching knife of mine... i swear it's around here somewhere.... it took anubis entirely too long to realize that the world wasn't upside down.
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#12 of in the enemy's territory oh boy, anubis. just breakin em down, one by one. the storm may have blown through, but there's a lot of pieces to pick up, and wounds don't just vanish. the next day started as the others.
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#11 of in the enemy's territory well, most of the heavy content is out of the way now. ahem, most. there's bound to be one last one, then it's all uphill from there. for now, here's a little sprinkling of it all for your troubles.
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#10 of in the enemy's territory in war, there are all kinds of victims. there's the many shades of gray, but there's also heaven and hell, and sometimes the difference is unexpected.
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#9 of in the enemy's territory so much can happen in so little a span of time. the saying goes "i'm on top of the world," but worlds spin... "that's right, you _shit licker_! now why don't you be a good, predictable mama's boy?
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#8 of in the enemy's territory terrible things happen in hell. but, sometimes, there's a silver lining. her own bark startled her awake. snapping up, nova glanced around with a growl quickly dying in her throat since there was no one to be growling at.
Behind Enemy Lines
Although it was easier to see thanks to it being early in the morning, this also meant the enemy would be able to see them more easily too. traditional battle doctrine says that if you can see the enemy, the enemy can see you.
In the Enemy's Territory #7
#7 of in the enemy's territory if you are returning to the story, i implore you to start over. i wrote a little journal entry about it, but i'll put it here as well. i knew where i wanted the story to go, but not entirely how it would get there.