Transcendence Prologue and Chapter 1
If i destroy you, i'm going to be left with an oversaturated canvas and i may just have to do a rewrite. i hate rewrites." wrath puffed out his chest. "ha! so you need us, do you?" "no," r3 answered simply.
Two Weeks - 1 Abduction - Rewrite
This is a cleaned up version of the first part of my Two Weeks series. I've reuploaded it as a new file because I want the old to remain right where it is, as a reminder of how far I've come as a writer over the last three years. So...
Christmas in Devout America
Such examples included renaming 'yuletide logs' to 'christmas logs', rewriting carols to remove pagan mentions, christmas specials that portray the holiday with 'occult elements' (i.e.
Unfaithful Love 2 (rewrite)
This is a rewrite for unfaithful love 2. made some changes for how the story goes. thank you for reading and enjoy ^w^ the next day had arrived, if only aida could have wished it never came.
IMPORTANT UPDATE
#11 of silver lining (archival version) important update: i've finally begun the process of ground-up rewriting silver lining, a task to be ongoing with uploads on a bi-weekly basis and continuing into new story at that rate when the rewrite
Red Roses mean love, White Doves peace: Srsly (6 Icons!)
. ---- that means you can do whatever the hell you want with srsly, from ripping it off entirely to 'quoting' it in your own guide to rewriting it.
Blue Dragon Story Commissions Open
If you don't like something that i have written then let me know and i will work to change/fix certain elements, however, if you tell me that you just don't like the idea and ask me to rewrite an entire story then you will be blocked.
[Commission] Hyaenathrope
One click of an unchecked website link had caused a weird shift in reality, rewriting the very fiber of the chimera's existence, as if someone slowly uploaded a new blueprint into them.
Captured Bunnie: V2.0
Fine \_\_\_\_\_ well i know its not easter any more but i started this story when it was and now with this rewrite i'm even farther off. for those of you that have read the previous version you know this is a serious rewrite and overhaul.
Chapter Nine
"now i want you to rewrite your introductory paragraph while also getting rid of the words on this list, and also get on dictionary.com and use the thesaurus to get rid of these baby words."
Pretty Plastic People
_then, i'll finish stable thief's rewrites, and we can make something good.
Adam's New Life - Chapter 2
I'm also going to go back and rewrite the beginning of chapter 1 and basically include the prologue in it, and completely rewrite that as well. comment and vote! let me know what i'm doing good or bad!