Enemy, Chapter 3
"the buffer's going critical! the energy is feeding back into the ship's systems and i can't redirect the reaction without causing an overload or a burnout."_ _electronics were smoldering.
Vargothen - Constructing A Foundation (Session 2)
We take down 2 zombies near us... the 2 zombies moving to the archers take damage as well... the warrior, and ebeis, are both seriously wounded, i am critically wounded at this point...
Can a Band-Aid Fix A Reactor Leak?
'critical' meant that the reactor was producing enough energy to sustain itself, 'super critical' meant that the amount of energy it was creating was going up. 'prompt critical' meant bad things. very bad things.
Starborne - Adrift in a Sea of Stars: Into the Light
Instead of days, the prognosis now indicates a critical failure in 10 hours, give or take a few minutes.
More gift art from Squishy~
`warning, heat levels critical, powering down to prevent damage.' i read on my hud before my body goes limp and my vision goes black. beep beep beep i hear in my head before i power up. `warning power levels critical, find power source immediately!'
New console in town
'warning, heat levels critical, powering down to prevent damage.' i read on my hud before my body goes limp and my vision goes black. _beep beep beep_ i hear in my head before i power up. 'warning power levels critical, find power source immediately!'
The great wolves V
By the time this is uploaded the prior 4 chapters are probably not reviewed yet so there was no chance for me to get criticism on the whole construct - i will try to use criticism to improve as soon as it starts coming.
Cherry Cordial Chaos
After a few years of turning operating systems into swiss cheese, he became notorious for high quality diagnostics, testing, and response to critical security issues.
Tiger Stories And Tiger Songs.
I expect you to be highly critical, because an author is only as good as his best critic. for those of you that read it, i was inspired to write this by the neil gaiman book "anansi boys" and thus, indirectly, african oral tradition.
Some Early Morning Fun
Negative and positive criticism is always appreciated.
Diaz
Diaz suffers for his art, and is a full subject of the tyranny of appearances whose critical sense of aesthetics has been pushed to an extreme to become inversely proportional to how hideous he's always felt he looked.
In the Home
Jake got up, popped a melatonin, and headed back to bed after seeing he'd only been sleep for about 30 minutes. ~~ comments/criticism always welcome.