The great wolves V
By the time this is uploaded the prior 4 chapters are probably not reviewed yet so there was no chance for me to get criticism on the whole construct - i will try to use criticism to improve as soon as it starts coming.
Some Early Morning Fun
Negative and positive criticism is always appreciated.
Anthro Behavioral Rehabilitation Specalist #2
The critical care wing requires different treatment than the rehabilitation wing. you've been warned. # anthro behavioral rehabilitation specialist 2 "frank, we work in different departments. i don't do critical care. that's incident response.
Peppers Are Hot, Keys Are Cold
Joey and kit finish te milk and move on to the next task, bumping the critics into last place. "hurry up, eddy!" barbara says. "we're in last and you don't chug faster, we're done for." "i'm almost done!" eddy says.
D.M.O.N. - Chapter 6: The First Expirience in Battle.
Thank you for any comments and critics that you gave me so far.
Chapter 34: Meetings with The Armor Evolution.
I thank you for those who participate and i do accept any critics and/or comments to my bad writing skills and many more (lol). thank you.
Virtual Friendship, Draft 1 CH 18
The critical hits piled up and by the time he had the body behind a tree, the player was out of it and he ran to his next target.
Horse meat
critics and comments, yes please.
30- Shattering Masks and Glasses
Yet by the time she had reached the top step, syrra had set aside her internal criticism and bowed with iaora, keeping her eyes low. "matriarch bast," she intoned evenly.
Past Dues PART 4 (Shark Anthro Story) [Commission]
She gave a little wave feeling a bit bashful with all of the extra attention on her, but she had wanted to be here for michael at this critical moment.
The True And Potent SECRETS of SoFurry Story Formatting
_** preparing text for publication on sofurry is a process, and the only critical part to that process is starting off with text formatted in some way not friendly to sofurry's simple web editing entry box.
Dr. Silver
critical injuries like the little girls before me are worked on first while the non critical are given pain killer and put in any large area we can put them in. the doctors rushing by give me half reports.