Afterimage
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. yes, i remember vivid moments now, we talked and drank into the misty dawn, i even hear the voices as we ran by water's side on wettest summer lawn.
Across the Divide
Please provide feedback, as i hope to continue editing and making these acceptable for publication. above the valley of my distant plans, a barrier of gray from shifting storm.
The great escape ( well more like attempt) pt1
#1 of the great escape this is my first attempt at a story and i would appreciate your feedback and if i should carry on. **the present ** the noise was loud and sudden.
Eure Meinung ist gefragt!
Auch wenn ich es bestimmt neu schreiben werde, so wäre es mir doch sehr gelegen, so viel wie feedback wie nur möglich von euch zu kriegen.
The Explorer: Forward
I am very open to constructive criticism and if you give me some feedback, i will do my best to get back to you and chat with you about it, but dont take offense if i dont.
The Dead Can't Feel No Pain (poem)
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Rainfall - Chapter 03
And please, don't be afraid to leave me your feedback down below, i very much appreciate it! [[here]](https://drive.google.com/drive/folders/1ascoypi_05gnwgrcrm77hdzxlx4z8kuw?usp=sharing) is my pdf repository, with all the latest versions.
Dinner and Dessert
Any feedback would be fantastic. i received a lot of feedback on the first chapter, which surprised me. i said to a friend that i believed the story's first chapter would get around 5-10 favorites during a certain period, but it got way more than that.
Boys Night Out
Well, anyways, hope to get some feedback from you guys! thanks again for reading ^.^ =
One Night (Interactive Story)
As always i am eagerly awaiting your feedback! [https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/xx5wjcsdvmkhmjb/one%20night.html?dl=0](https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/s/xx5wjcsdvmkhmjb/one%20night.html?dl=0)
The reason I live.
Please give me some pointers i love feedback. sorry if you find this to be utter garbage, i personally do a bit, but like i said wanted a second opinion. another day, just put on a smile. make a joke to keep up appearances.
Poem: descent into madness
This is a piece of poetry i wrote once while depressed, if i get enough feedback i might consider uploading my other poetry as well, and dont worry none of them are as moody as this one, im more of a love poem writer :p i lay in bed another sleepless night