Trent's Punishment
Comments and critique appreciated~ trent winced, rubbing his sore neck as he leaned against the cool bathroom walls. the young sparrow's master, david, stood across from him, giving him a disappointed glare.
Feral Breeding
Please comment and critique! )) the warrior was asleep on the floor of the kennel where she had been leashed up after her milking. her breasts were still slightly swollen, pressing against her now-tight breastplate.
Extreme College Experiences: The Buck and the Bull (Rhino)
Also love critiquing. warning: 18+ naughty stuff the lights were off, and the college was lost in darkness.
The cat without a home (Part 4)
I hope you enjoy and please comment and give me critique if you like. also, requests are always welcome just send me a pm, note, or whatever you like.
Your Name Is: Skúmálfar - Chapter 05
And uuhh if you don't mind a little critique, you're not exactly bursting at the seems with friends skúmálfar. your old head mates are gonna be your best bet.
Escape
Any critiques and comments are welcome. if you're interested to join our writing group, join us at: https://t.me/joinchat/cpoezhclggenroeh0yywvg tips, ideas, brainstoms and debates are just a few of the things that tend to happen there.
Black Fifteen
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Brothers in love: Part one
Should you have any comments then please post them, i could use any constuctive critique.
Practicing the Erotic
As always comments, critique, and suggestions are welcome! thomas shifted his stance as the rope was secured by his fox. the tiger had his wrists tied together and hoisted above him.
Blackbird
This was put together and edited in a fairly short period of time, so critique is welcome despite being a gift, as things might easily have slipped past me. the dreams had started coming a week ago.
Breathing Life--Chapter One
Comments, concerns, critiques go in the comments. [edit] looks like the first time i uploaded it my formatting was thrown off. everything looks like it's fixed now though.
Brother Light, Brother Dark: In Which Jaqaran is Made an Accomplice
All comments, critiques, and criticisms are welcome.** by the time donichus had left the building, feeling more or less relieved, jaquaran was still swinging around his sword, being careful to avoid pedestrians as they walked by.