The Demon's Cafe Improvements
The demon's café improvements for akimitsusevecan by draconicon the familiar pressure of a coin in hand was followed by the warmth of a coffee shop and the slightly bitter-burning smell of espresso being poured through machines
Cyniras and Vaihorn 1 (improved)
Cyniras was alone in the cave. He was sure. Yes now that he thought about it he'd seen Vaihorn leave earlier, about 10 minutes ago. Cyniras was a young male, feral dragon, just out of his teens so he was well past puberty, but despite...
Task Force - Improvements
One which would improve our eyesight and night vision. the bone tissue strengthener would practically make our bones unbreakable.
Impersonal Improvement [Sketch]
_Go on. Give it a try. Who's there to stop you?_ Your ears perk at the first insistence there in the back of your head, the impulse laid deftly enough that it feels as though it came from you yourself instead of an outside source. You life...
Recontextualize 6 - Improv
The agony of anticipating torture continued. Part of Judy wanted to beg them to torture her at least then it wouldn't be like this. She didn't know how much time passed since they strapped her to a table and the only instructions she received was to...
Room For Improvement, Part Two
In this sequel for aacid, not only does his day improve, but he joins in on the fun!
Cyniras and Vaihorn 2 (improved)
"You took your time." said Vaihorn smugly trying to hide his big dragony grin. Cyniras looked round and gasped. That was quick. He could only hope that Vaihorn hadn't heard or seen him. "When did you get in?" blurted Cyniras a bit too quickly. He...
Room For Improvement, Part Three
"Glad to have that little distraction taken care of..." "Emphasis on little?" "I know they say that there's strength in numbers and all that, but I think size is where the **real** advantage lies." "Stop bragging about yours, then," Tess rolled her...
Room For Improvement, Part One
If there was anything as boring and time consuming as a 'mandatory' meeting, Aaron had yet to come across it in his life. "As you can see on slide five, we've got a few people across the shipping department that are failing to hold up their end of the...
Self Improvement 2
A second self improvement story. ^^ more transformation and other assorted shenanigans. have fun! **self improvement 2: new-u** what started off as an isolated incident became several case studies within a matter of weeks.
Counter Earth Chronicles Fallen Empire Chapter 12: Defending The Villain
Counter Earth Chronicles - Fallen Empire **Chapter 12: Defending The Villain** Day 13 (ATF) After waking up halfway through the night to comfort a despondent lioness, morning came too soon. I was awakened by a soft paw to my head as my perfect...
ADaHH Rewrite plot improvement
But this crazy real world bs has given me some ideas on how to improve the story plot further. new world order is another one, or the illuminati. a collection of powerful elites who control the entire world.