Accent experiment - Good or Bad?
Experimenting with accents in dialogue. Not sure if I should even have an accent at ALL, but I figured I should try and get it down anyways. Critique mainly on the...
Kairn - Chapter 1
He couldn't believe it; his parents had kicked him out just like that. He wasn't a piece of trash just to be discarded, he had flesh and bone. He had feelings, passions and...
Kairn and Bren - Series.
Frozen, he stood in the hallway. A towel hung loosely around his waste, held only by the ridge of his hip and rear. His damp fur a grey tinge in the poor lighting, lupine fur was always...
Cergard, war side.
Copyright of pen name SP Mats, and all those included under said alias. Explciti language, just a fair warning. "Hey wake up, you're on the job." Kor snapped upright, bumping his head off the roof of the cockpit...
Draen - Meeting Zek.
Tipping a glass to his muzzle Draen surveyed the bar, stout vodka slipping down his throat with a familiar burn. The bar was modest, nothing flashy really. Dark...
Melting the Snow
Snow littered the air, a swarm of light crystals being controlled and ushered by the forces of air. Dred shook his snout, the few flakes that built up on his nose now free to fly about. He pulled the dark grey cloak he was wearing around him. The...
Walking The distance - Part 2 1/2 teaser.
Just a teaser for ya'll. =3 Working on a big segment tomorrow, Thursday, I'll make a big post then. =) Really working on getting things solid, never meant for myself to focus on this one so much lol. Gotta get character ironed...
Walking The Distance - Part 2
A full plate of spaghetti later, Leo was back at the computer. A long message stared back at him as he sat down. Jess: Good they had a room open. I'm worried about my parents snooping around my computer... Not sure how much she's onto us, but my mom...
Walking the Distance - Part 1-1/2
REALLY short this time! Sorry, life's been kinda moving fast. My desperate attempt to fix a hole is below. =) I'm getting a few days off in a row from work so I'm hoping to hash out a larger chunk. Lets hope! Leo's...
Walking the distance.
Time seems to move slower when you're waiting for something, or something that shocks you into a stupor happens. In this case, Jess was waiting for class to end....
My dream....
A dream I chase in vain, that I know I will never have. As Dante loved Beatrice and couldnt have her, I feel for him. But their is hope.....or atleast the thoughts, to remind me and let me live it. Another sunny day, the rays of pure light...
Sigole, Roy's distraction.
"Your gonna be late for work again! Hurry your ass up!" "Shut up yah old woman!" She acted like his mother, not his landlord. Some stomping and a door slamming...