GRUESOMENESS TEST
Basically i wanted to see how well i could write a gruesome scene without any actual dialog. so, tell me what you guys think. any and all criticism is appreciated.
GRUESOMENESS TEST V.2
#2 of tests the sight was gruesome. the road was covered in blood and body bits. but this wasn't a car accident. of course, that's what the news would call it. an "accident". people wouldn't panic then.
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