Discharging Ballast (TTW pt. 7)
Kane hated commentary like that. it felt so disingenuous, like there was little tolerance for the struggle of being in the moment of having just seconds to make a decision while these suits had hours to form opinions.
My Guardian Demons - Part 1
They didn't command me to do things, or criticize my every action, but seemed to be content with forming a sort of commentary track to everything i did.
Party Favors
Damon couldn't resist giving commentary from the sidelines, having located a beer to sip on while he recovered. "oh, yeah, it'll fit," the horse replied, grinning even wider.
The Wizard's House of Pleasure 1
The tv was on, and the porno was playing again, this time even better, with the dragons on the aglets providing the commentary.
Story 1: The Locker Room
Limited character development, few plot points, no real overriding social commentary-- just smut. readers may also note that this story started in 2013; it's been sitting half-complete for about two and a half years.
Therapy - Session 6
The husky strolled from table to table, tracing his fingertip across the wares, making no real comment to each of the vendors as he continued his commentary. "then there was that other guy. the one with the incest collies?
The Bane of Dragons
The fact that he could get info without the commentary meant a lot. as he walked across the rooftop, he kept one hand to the side of his head, still talking away. "so, what kinda demons are we talking about?
The Privileges of Public Service - Part One
Again she gestured to the back of the bar, and nick took the chance to escape without any further social commentary being laid at his feet.
A Failed Duty - Epilogue: 2nd Letter
Disclaimer: the following will contain homosexual individuals and relationships and may be an interesting commentary on life, death, immortality, god, gods and various religions.
Webbed Together
The lack of antics allowed him to concentrate, and the lack of commentary kept him sane. just as he went to put the now cool metal back into the furnace, a chime rang out in the workspace.
Warm-Up, Tanuki Car Troubles
.~" max's commentary was like listening to a plate being scrapped by a knife in the middle of cutting steak, but it was just one of many things that carl had to ignore if he wanted this gasket. "how's the first batch doin'...?"
Preface
I am fond of the occasional walk through the woods. During the summer, I reside in a little hut not far from the West coast so I can focus on my writing. The smell of warm pine and fresh sea salt is perhaps the most familiar scent to me; it is home....