Study Break On The Beach...[Revised]
Soooo, i had to re-write it from scratch...er at least the beach scene...which i acutally don't mind, because now the yiffy level went through the roof on this one!!!!!
My Beautiful Daughter
I have to re-write the whole thing eventually. so in its place, for now, here's a more... traditionally english rendition of my favorite kind of dragon mating scene, since i felt a craving for one and i couldn't quite find enough stories like it.
Coell 2 - Factory Reset
They hadn't touched her mind and core programming, it was far too complex to simply re-write what they needed from scratch.
Courtship, Part 11
Again, something that had multiple re-writes. originally i intended to upload it alongside 2 other updates, "a night to remember (teri)" and a third one. but eh... i've been away from this project too long. so here you go.
Ander - Part 6: Subchapter 25
I talked about how i had to go back and change a certain event, and how that minor change led to a massive re-write. i said i'd point it out when i came to it, but the truth is, the actual change happened a few subchapters back.
Brighter than the Stars
Took me about 2 hours to fully develop and write my contribution, 1 hr of editing and about 4-5 hours of re-writes, editing, cutting and or changing etc. pulling at least one all nighter because i just couldn't leave this unfinished/ where i had left it.
Danvers - This is Me challenge, shades of the past, shades of a future.
A re-write of my entry for last years dragon's lair contest, i re-wrote it to fix all the errors and make it readable.
A Boy and His Dog [Chapter 1]
#5 of a boy and his dog re-write of reikhan meeting shugp a boy and his dog "don't you see my beloved shiki?" an overly large brown skinned woman was saying to a small child who's hand she grasped firmly.
Wanting More (Part 4)
Four hours later they were on their best way to being a little tipsy when the movie finally ended and they both laid back and stared at the ceiling, laughing at the great accomplishment they had just achieved by re-writing the entire script of a classical
Xochipilli
[update] the flash drive i was storing ch. 2 on is corrupted, so i'll have to re-write it when i find the motivation, sorry. i'm already working on another story at least. * * * jake.
United Through Two Worlds Chapter 5
I plan to re-write the older chapters when the story is finsihed (hopefully around chapter 30-40), but right now i intend it finish it first. warm morning light filtered through the old glass window, old glass twisting and distorting it.
Chapter 21: Reality Check.
He start with mathematics, he read equations step by step and re-write at the textbook. after he understands most of it, he solved all the questions he was told to.