#SimplyPurrfect (Revised Edition)
#3 of stories (transformation) the exact same story, but heavily revised since i'm trying to improve my writing skills. i should start from the beginning.
A Night In The City
When the law was revised to cover only ingestion of prey, new forms of ingestion appeared as predators craved the kill more than they needed it. creativity became the norm, and the unthinkable became the every-day.
Tropical Revised - Chapter Ten
"Are you two all packed?" questioned the wolf, Nate sneaking up behind the otters in the crowded hallway. The final bell for the school day had just wrung, and with no school following next week because of Chymerage, the students were more than excited...
Manda Redt de Wereld
Script inconsistencies in the behaviour and dialogue of significant characters, particularly lu, were often seized upon as the foundations of a terrible twist ending (van de welt would later dismiss all these inconsistencies as products of being unable to revise
PSB: A Basic Introductory
Originally, the rule said the first to orgasm lost, but i have revised this as i felt it was much too restricting for determining who was superior in the relationship.
The Gaming Journal #1: The Problem with Fighting Games
Koei tecmo's_dead or alive 5_also had three revisions over the course of 4 years.
Black Swan pt 2
I'll probably make these longer on a revise but this is the first few things i've written in years so yeah... would love some constructive crit. i woke up with a start, feeling another presence against me.
Fathom's Phantoms, Ch 5: It's Only the Beginning
Mike nodded to himself, tweaking a few words and revising one of the sentences before uploading it, and he continued the playback.
Tiger by the Tail (Revised)
;3 tiger by the tail (revised) written by d.j. disclaimer: zig zag is a character created by max blackrabbit, while characters tracy and stacy skunk, tina lynx, hoss, and sheila vixen are created by eric schwartz.
Angie (Epilouge and Author Notes)
This story took me a total of four months to write, revise, and rewrite. i revised the story one last time before posting it here. yes, i am a delphinic zoophile. this story was written entirely by me, without any personal help.
Chapter 3 - Interlude with Red Riding Hood
Though this story seemed to be a ‘revised version', which is what the narrator had called it when last they spoke. it seemed that his story of ‘little red riding hood' was different from the one he had come from.
(Revised Edition) Human Origins Chapter 1: Beginnings
Human origins chapter 1: beginnings hello, fellow humans and furs, after letting this story sit on sofurry for awhile while i worked out some problems in real life, i felt the need to revise it a little bit and add a little bit of detail.