The Family Curse Chapter 1: A Change of Perspective
Don't forget to vote, critique and fav this story if you like it. i am always open for suggestions. you may also request oc cameos, tie-ins or full roles in my stories. i will do my best to include them.
A Bound Birthday
Have a good read and be sure to leave your comments and critique! "what are you doing now?" jaiden asked as his eyes became covered by black cloth.
Master's Pet - Prologue: The Storyteller Appears
Any and all critiques are welcome and desired the vast room slowly filled with furs of all ages, as it did muted, excited voices began filling the void in anticipation of what was to come.
The Tunnel
I look forward to comments and suggestions, as well as critique and any errors that you might spot that i missed in my personal editing. for those of you interested, this is my submission to the wordsmith awards challenge by naraki wolf.
The Warning
You can leave me comments, but most critique will be ignored. remember, i want this to feel unedited and rough, even if the author had some skill in writing. so don't feel bad if i don't listen to suggestions on how to make it work better.
Look Both Ways Part I
critique welcomed, of course. (thumbnail art by maplegold on fa) nothing seemed more right than running on that fair spring day.
Prison Cell (Thursday Prompt 23/8/12)
* * * comments, suggestions, and critiques are all welcome and appreciated. thanks for reading!
The Dragon and the Apple Trees
I am by no means a great story teller, so feel free to critique. (yes i know it's short) there was once a child, a young dragon, growing up in the world as it is today.
Everything Or Nothing cap 4 -Questions and Concerns
#5 of everything or nothing its done, phew , comments and critiques are veary welcomed ! :) "so what did you want to talk about, doc?" jorek said whit a raised eyebrow, his tone light and friendly.
The Kinky Kitty Part 1
This is one of my first ever stories and i would love feedback, critique, etc. i really hope you enjoy my story and maybe ill post more in the future if you like it. kinky kitten by nictatew this is a story about a girl named samantha.
Rubber Wolf Paradise
Now i know that others are reading this story and saying thank god it's not a text brick any more, my sincerest apologies in dropping my stories on here without editing and with that if there are any more critiques i would be happy to try and oblige
Puppy Love Chapter One
I have no idea how it will end, so any ideas, comments, and critiques are welcome. flames will be laughed at and discarded. i guess it all started about six years ago while my father was pastor of the mount olive family church.