Wrong Side Of Town
Any constructive critisisms are much appreciated. even 'you suck balls' as long as you tell me why :d
The Lab is off limits.
I really want to know what you liked/disliked about my story. please contact me. any critisism is better than no critisism at all.(it's the only way i can improve myself)
my thoughts for the day
I feel retarded but i also feel beastly smart. i need to tell people who i really am and how i really feel. think of me all you want. call me names, critisize me, judge me, hate me, love me, tell me what you think. i care not what you say, all i care about
Chapter One - Earnest Desire
For now...just sit back and enjoy. email me for some constructive critisism. i really appreciate that... big thanx too skie strife for inspiring me to write this story as well as some other friends... now....on to the story...
A Better Friendship--Chapter 1: Reconnecting
Constructive critisism welcome! like, reeeaaallly welcome. it was an early wednesday morning in the middle of jay's summer break. he would be entering his sophomore year of high school when it started up again.
The Digimon Wars Rewrite Chapter 1
Most of these are not uploaded because i never got around finishing them, i stopped writing the digimon wars story completely for a year because of the lack of readers/comments/critisism etc.
Initiation
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The Thief
Please, give me some constructive critisism, i like that. well that is all. i hope you'll like the adventure of my dear argonian.
Past Life Ch 1
Oh, and ps: please leave any type of critisism. i'm sorta curious about my new prespective. ~~~ the story all began 500 years ago... the large manor stood proudly over the green hills. the white walls turned brighter under the bright sunlight.
Tree Top Stories Pt. II
Both positive and negative critisisms welcome. tree top stories pt. ii several nights had passed since the first time the relationship between kyle and shane had began to bloom.
The Power of Imagionation Part One
This is my first story so critisism is welcome! rember: if you dont like it dont read it. simba is copyright of disney.
Chapter 5: a little side track
#5 of freindly group hi guys, did this in one day suprisingly, erm a little side track for another character and a new writing style please please please critisism so i know whether to use this style again or not usual under 18 disagree with gay,