Vampirism
All comments/critisisms/questions/requests welcome. hope you enjoyed it.\*
My Winged Lover
Conctructive critisism is greatly welcome. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ my winged lover pale moonlight shone over my head.
Second Chances: Chapter 1
Feel free to critisize as i am just starting to write for others to actually view so i'll probably need alot of improvement.
From Chains to Riches: Chapter 6
. ~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~ end of part 6 i really appreciate comments on my writing, weather it be one to congratulate me or to critisize me, i still appreciate it.
A Day In The Forest
The end kinda ok now that youve read the story please put constructive critisism comments about how i could do better see notes depending if i feel like it i may continue this story excpecially if a lot of people like it i will probably start over
The shaman of the sun
I want to be critisiced, not sure how that is written, on everything. of course if you see problems with grammar forgive me, i don't talk english all the time, you know living in mexico and everything.
Dark's story (part 2)
Oh well >_> same as always, i loves teh constrictive critisisms. uuum. yeah its a request from a friend on his character.
Alice In The Woods
Suggestions and constructive critisism are appreciated._ _originally written for [z-byte](http://www.sofurry.com/user/view/profile?
The Meeting
"a while," they smirked in tandem as alan panted quietly **\* \* \* \* \*** **fin** **afterword:** i may add a second part to this, if enough people enjoy my little tale, so please give me all the feedback and critisism that you
A Pandaren's Tale: Beating the Heat
If you have any constructive critisism that you think will help me improve, i'd be happy to hear it.
Past Life Ch 1
Oh, and ps: please leave any type of critisism. i'm sorta curious about my new prespective. ~~~ the story all began 500 years ago... the large manor stood proudly over the green hills. the white walls turned brighter under the bright sunlight.
To Pay A Man's Respects With Blood 1 - Randy's Beef Hold-Up
Finally, this story is not as good as i thought it'd turn out but i'm not good at opening scenes so progressing into the story should hopefully be better as i'll have a better idea of what i'll be doing then and all feedback and critisisms especially wanted