this is my first story comments requested
"sup, this is the new kid, alemane." "oh, a new kid. finally, some change in this damn school!" said the male horse in a deep, powerful voice. going from left to right, jeff names the others at the table.
My Happiness - Chapter 1
Anyways, did you hear about a new kid at our school?" cody asks. "new.. kid?" i ask, confused. "yeah, there's this new kid transferring to our school. people are saying and/or spreading rumors he's the priests son." "priests son?" i asked.
Love At It's Finest: Episode 1
Being the new kid _on top_ of the pressure of being a senior? yea-no, that shot down my balloon faster than shooting down a duck in a loony toon's cartoon.
CH:1 Monday
I turned my head to see the new kid, he was beautiful ! he was a tall fox with gleaming silver fur, and white tipped ears, and tail.
Port Dore - Chapter Two
"come on new kid! get up and fight!" i heard the same person shout again. 'new kid?' i glanced at the crowd. "i don't fight." i heard a familiar voice. "can't we just talk, i mean we can jus-..." i heard the crowd gasp. "oh i can see now!"
a normal life?
I heard that another new kid came from the same school as the new bully mark, the new kid was not a bully though, his name was daniel. i thought he was really nice. he was popular to. i thought he was going to be a jerk but i was wrong.
A new school year Ch.3
"yeah, there was a new kid at school and he came over" she smiled at this and ruffled my head fur. "that's nice of you, getting to know the new kid, being new st a school isn't easy." she said.
High School as a Satyr
She said in a very unforgiving tone " so you're the new kid everyones been talking about. we'll newbie, we have a policy here at montel high . it's called always mess with the new kid.".
Desiderio 1
I looked over to the barn door, and there was rose, the old new kid. a pureblood leopard, i still don't know why she came here. but she's been quite helpful as of late, so i guess i shouldn't complain.
Outcast- Chapter 2
"i could pass as a new kid!" i said. he smiled and said, "you are very unrecognizable now." he walked downstairs, his arm around me, and we walked into the kitchen. "hey mom," he said, "can you give us a ride to school?"
A New School and a New Start
"hey, aren't you the new kid that moved from georgia?" he asked. "yeah" i replied," was my accent that pronounced?" "nah," he said.
first attempt at story, let me know what you think
Chuck had to do something to get the new kid out of the class or at least away from kara so he could speak to her.