The Safety of His Arms (rewrite)
As i said, it's my first story and i hope to improve. this is the rewritten version of my first story. i added some content and tried to improve by using the constructive criticism from the other. thank you for reading.
Ninja Wolf: Chapter 1: Prologue
first story in the series. **hello there guys! so, i had this story in mind for a long time now and i finally decided to get it started now. this is my first story so i apologise in advance for any problems with the story.
My life as a furry (intro) [Goodbyes and pain]
This is the story of my real life but i changed it a little so it fits it to the furry category the rest is all true. please forgive my spelling english is not my first language and forgive my format this is my first story plz comment and
Julia's Discovery
\*this is my first story, so tell me what you think! keep waiting for part 2!\*
The wolf and his dragon. Ch 1. coming out of the crowded closet
Tell me how you think it could have been better, and tell me what you think, considering it is my first story. though it isn't yiff, i can't say it will stay that way ;)
The Beginning To Another Day!
Other than that this is my first story i have written in over 3 years so i would like some comments on the story and don't hold back any criticizm or harsh comments if you have any.i want them all..
The Fox Cub: First Encounter; Part 1
#1 of the fox cub something people normaly don't read: i want to put out there that my first story was not meant to be seen. after writing then destroying copy after copy i finally made this.
Blackfox: recorded mission one: No fair
* * * ok that was my first story ever, was kinda short and not to eroitc or violent, more funny me thinks, plz comment on my idea or style, i know my spelling will be off so no need to say.
Confusion
Note: this is my first story so please comment and tell me how it is ;) oh and please don't tell me it sucks i already know that \*\*\* before the move: zen was a 16 year old snow leopard standing about 5'7" with a brown eye and a silver eye, he didn't
The beauty of a vixen... PART 1
.** **this is my first story here, so please don't be too hard om me.** **since this is my first story it won't be very long, call it a preview of the story if you wish.** **i would allso like to say thanks to strawberry\_reian for
Unknown Wars- Chapter 1- Memories
Personal note- this is the first story i have ever posted on yiff star, and for that matter at all on any public site xd i hope u guys enjoy the story, i will continue the story if i get at least 1 preson who like sthe series and wants me to coninue, if not
The Camping Trip
My first story ever would like some tips on what i could do to make it better my first story you would think that life begins when you are born but for me life didn't start till i was 17. i wasn't a normal teen and i knew it!