Chapter 1: A stressful life
Lol) since this site does post a note to every body that is watching this story every time i do change, be it something as little as adding comma.
The New Boy
It was a simple question really, but some how i couldn't focus on it, so i hazarded a guess, "there should be a comma in it?"
Ferret's Five - Beginning of the End
I assure you that the sec will be launching into a full investigation into your conduct today... and if we find even one comma out of place in your finances then you won't ever have to worry about having anything to rob ever again."
[Commison]Tesa has a new life
Commission for gogogplease forgive lack of comma spilt some beer on keyboard didn't clean well enough and it ended up being stuck though i did get a few in there. i will not be writing any more adult+ stories. also i messed up on tense sorries.
Chapter 52: Beginning of a Nightmare
The police were dispatch to find any clue that leads to the anonymous comma syndrome." "three were in coma?" henry asked. "how is this possible, what happened? this has never happen before." "i think i know what happened...."
Omega male
He'd gotten a steward on the comma second later, however it turned out that he'd made a mistake on their form and there were no female tiger companions or female companions at all remaining. they were stuck with karl and his friendly smile.
The Professor 04
"next thing you know we'll be arguing the oxford comma like first-year freshman!" frances was saying to kirkpatrick as calvin entered. "ah! the little maid has arrived." both wolves stared at him, and now calvin could feel their desire.
The Breegull Boat Part 3: Not familiar, is it?
I hate sofurry, unlike weasyl, fa or da, requires goshdarn 'commas' in their tags. ya weirdo. all things considered, i imagine they don't take night-time patrols all that serious anyway.
Movie Previews
I know my grammar is a bit lacking and i tend to use to many commas and ands. i also know i don't go greatly into character detail. is there anything else i should know? any tips?
02B - Back to Work
While her fur was mostly black all over, she had those secret little spots of white along the inside of her right thigh, ending in a large comma of contrasting fur around her wiry pubic fluff.
No CGI: Matte Painting 2
Professional comma, is it?” you nod, smiling. “that’s my stage name.” “i see you’re writer and co-director. how on earth did you convince them to make something like that?” you laugh. “i had the idea in my head for a long time.
Lantaria: Search for Enlightenment. Ep1. The Finding
I was giving her an all-out passion-filled pheromone-stimulating comma-state-inducing whalloping whoppa'! you know what the worst part was? the most embarrassing a-a-and worst thing ever was? i was starting to like it.