The Gate-Way: Chapter 9 – Real Men Do Cry
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
The restless night
Please enjoy and if there is critisism about anything, please feel free to comment!
The House Dahan part III: Home Alone
#4 of dahan **any comments on the story are welcome, particulary constructive critisism. any thing you like/dislike/love/hate, things you'd like to see and things you'd hate to see. i want to know it all!
Dark's story (part 2)
Oh well >_> same as always, i loves teh constrictive critisisms. uuum. yeah its a request from a friend on his character.
The Dream
. ^\_^ i welcome all critisism. this is the first part in a series that i hope to make atleast three stories long. scince this is the first story bare with it. i know this one is a little choppy and stuff but the second one will be a lot better.
the clash of the immortals
This is just a rough draft, any and all constructive critisism will be greatly appreciated. i know that this is probably a giant steaming pile of crap compared to the other writers on sofurry, but it's my first giant steaming pile of
The Uncorrupted
Looking primarily for constructive critisism to improve my writing skills :) and yes, i use the word "it" a lot in refering to the undead creature.
Arcturus Chapter I: A derelict ship.
** **any comments on the story are welcome, particulary constructive critisism. any thing you like/dislike/love/hate, things you'd like to see and things you'd hate to see. i want to know it all!
The Gate-Way: Chapter 8 – A Warrior Born
As always all comments, constructive critisism and suggestions are welcome and greatly appreciated. i hope you enjoy this chapter.
The Gate-Way: Chapter 2 – Skies On Fire
All comments, suggestions and constructive critisism is greatly appreciated and welcome. \*note: all characters within this story are entirely of my own creation and design, or that of friends who have requested that i include them in my story.
Chronicals of the Black Guard: Chapter 3
Never once critisizing or complaining that he should have done this or that. what suprised him most was, as he finished, he felt her arms slide around his shoulders, hugging him softly from behind.
The House Dahan part IV : Lord Han comes to visit
#5 of dahan **any comments on the story are welcome, particulary constructive critisism. any thing you like/dislike/love/hate, things you'd like to see and things you'd hate to see. i want to know it all!