One Lonely Night
I would really appreciate creative criticism on the sex itself, general grammar, paragraphing, punctuation, all of that good stuff. this story can have a sequel or be a stand alone, so let me know what you would like.
Fox Story
The hailstorm of keystrokes snapped his attention back, keelan busy tweaking the opening paragraph. "so who's the main protagonist?"
Self Re-acquainted
The catch was being under 10 paragraphs. not being one to dissapoint, here's what i hope is what you wanted. self re-acquainted a drunken wolf production the cast finally came off.
Requirements for Role Playing
If you do write at least a paragraph, or a bit more, i will consider you for role playing. 18: what is bs, what do you mean? what i mean by bs is the person posts something that is not realistic at all.
A convenient place
Please take the time to read this last two paragraphs. i know it has several problems and probably also a few mistakes both spelling wise and gramatically.
The Demon of Phlegdis
He skimmed through the passage describing the rod, and then noticed an asterisk by a paragraph. another paragraph was preceded by two asterisks.
The Sacred Grove
I don't know if i have made the story any better than johnny's single paragraph, but i hope you like it.
Rough Housing - Chapter 1
After paragraph.
A Sure Thing
There is both m/f and m/m m/f in paragraphs 19 - 45 m/m in paragraphs 46 - 69 i love reading any comments and criticism. have a wonderful day :) wait what? that place? yeah yeah, i know all about it. where'd you even - know what, never mind.
Extreme College Experiences: A Stud and His Bitches
As it opened up, the words at the end of a very long paragraph were clear, "...be here or i'll fuck you up later!"
Those Creative Urges
If he could just come up with one more paragraph so that his reader would stop complaining about writing too short...hmm...
A Bunny in the Cock is Worth One in the Hole
If you don't like prey being reformed, don't read the very last paragraph, think of it as an optional ending. thanks very much for reading!