Capturing the Erotic
As always comments, critique, and suggestions are welcome. the tiger knelt on the floor and groaned as he was prepped for the next scene. a small fox, which from his perspective looked to be half his size, was busy adjusting the ropes on his body.
Pt. 1 - Betrayed a friend
Be nice to me, but do critique it fairly!
No Day Off
As always comments, critique, and suggestions are welcome! connor typed away at the keyboard on his laptop as he lay in bed. messaging his friend, james. the two had gotten together several times before.
A Wizard’s Secret – Simply a Thief
Comments and critiques are very welcome. :p)
A Gift for a Good Slave Part 1
As always, comments and critiques are welcome! and a merry christmas to all of you. there were only two things slave concentrated on with his knees buried in the rubber mat: his thumping heartbeat, and the twitching of his locked cock.
The morning after the night before
All comments welcome, critiques, and bits you liked please say(if any!!)
Something other than games
* * * ok, so this is my first erotic story, ever, so any critique would be much appreciated. also might want to continue this into a series if this goes over well.
A Real Fucking Bitch
Every attempt to help her(and indirectly help the rest of us actually get work done) she seems as a critique of her work or a personal attack against her.
Thieves Chapter 1 - Flight
If you do, critique, questions and suggestions are always welcome in the comments! **thieves** chapter 1 - flight the little fox was running as fast as his paws would carry him through the snow, as he heard the tracker dogs bark behind him.
Evil Genius Ch. 1
Feel free to give constructive critique or comments. nothing spectacular happens in this chapter though unfortunately.
Vixi's Shocking Meal
Comment if you like, but please, i don't want critiques on this one either.
Disproportionate Revenge!
Here's hoping it gets a bit of attention and critique here! hey! look! rainy posts something again! this time it's vore related. my first foray into this kinda thing. if you have any comments or suggestions, feel free to comment! i won't bite!