sonic the adventures: chapter 1
Comment down below and give me your feedback should i make the chapters longer? ok sonic out!
Astral High - Chapter 11
I still want feedback. you know, to those of you are reading this but aren't saying anything. you know, just a reminder that feedback would be amazing. hear the thu'um of my fellow furs and what not. gods i'm a nerd.
Chocolates or whatever...
I'm open to any and all feedback but comments are preferred._ _~stay crispy_
Gifted - Preview #1
P.s.: there is an original format than this, but that'll also come when my work gets enough positive feedback. pp.s.: ivan ingram is a rabbit.....just forgot to put that in....(dammit!)
Stop.. please!
Anyways, leave feedback, the second chapter will by up sometime in the near future.
Mixed Loyalty
\*chuckle\* and i do hope that you'll enjoy the read, as always, and i look forward to seeing your feedback, of course! cheers, y'all!
Stork Inc. [Archives]
This is a literary experiment and open to feedback on refinement and continual ideas. plumes of white smoke were being pumped out by several spires, bouncing up and down as they vivaciously pushed out the benign emissions.
Chapter 2-A Lover's Mourning
Please, i want feedback
From Co-workers to Mates
I love feedback dreamy husky
Towers of Seshin: Part 3
He felt pain surge through him; magical feedback. it occurred when something that the mage was trying to control was more powerful than the mage itself.
Endurance Training
I hope you had a good time, and i look forward to your feedback! remember that all votes, faves and watches will help others to find these stories to enjoy as well! cheerio!
A few random updates!
In addition to this i plan to do a full edit of all my work so far, so if you see it's been updated be sure to take a second look and give me your feedback again.