Bioshock - Betrayal?
Pacing, plot development, character development, and relationships were all... well crap. this series has a ton of flaws.
Don and Jake - Chapter 4
#4 of don and jake decided to go ahead and post ch 4 because it's so short and just contains plot development with nothing "juicy." also i suck at dialogue. jake pulled into the parking lot of t-bone records.
Typical Nights - Part 2 ~ Krys
#2 of typical nights part 2 of "typical nights" this story's just a plot developer. there's no yiff, and just partial nudity. the beginning switches between krys' and keegan's points of view.
Sieben
A sudden jolt woke me from unconsciousness. I became alert quickly, opening my eyes and realizing I was still where I was when I fell asleep. I relaxed some and looked out the window into the seemingly endless desert. The bus rattled and I imagined...
Corrupted Souls -- Chapter Four
**\* \* \* CHAPTER IV \* \* \*** My father knew that something was very wrong. Call it a canine's instinct, but he just knew that something was wrong... "You... You're not Jamie..." My father uttered, almost in a trance, to my body. "What do you...
ToLaD: Chapter 7: Questions
Warning: This chapter contains slight references to homosexuality and may be ideologically sensitive for there being more than one god or offended by the word of 'temple.' If so, please either remain calm/cautious or not read this chapter. Do not...
Interlude 1: Nonlinearity For the Win!...I think.....
His mind throbbing, Ethan attempted to think of his earlier years, hoping that it'd ease the pain...He began to think back to when he had obtained Beleza when she was just a fish egg. Before then, he was ridiculed by his classmates at school, and had...
Red Moon:Revolution Chapter 3
Red Moon: Revolution Chapter 3 The Earth is covered mostly by water, vast expanses of nothing but water. It was easy to get lost in the ocean, among the waves and the storms that wracked the Atlantic seasonally. It was easy to disappear, especially...
Son of a Dream
The Earth rushed towards her faster; the clouds exploded and on both sides like a tunnel and the ground revealed its patchwork of cities and farmland. She folded her body further, hitting the speed limit for Jumpers and exceeding it. The air was colder...
King sparo
Sins I was born I always craved power. I was poor and lived in a crummy shack with my sister and it was a hard time. One day a merchant with various magical objects, one of them caught are attenchen a music box that was suppose to grant wishes. This...
Under Cloak of Darkness: Chapter 5
She tried to run, but couldn't. She simply ran in place, legs moving but going nowhere. He walked up to her slowly, a smirk on his steel features. He reached her and stood to her side. She stopped running. Laughing, he knelt and spoke. "You think...
The Invasion of Acacia: Chapter 1
\*Disclaimer\* All Location, Names and Characters are © Jordan P. Unless Otherwise Noted The Retalian race and original concept is © Tom M. December 2004 \*Disclaimer\* Authors Note: This is the first chapter of of a story series, I don't know...