ChurchBoy
Any comments or critisism should be sent to [[email protected]](/cdn-cgi/l/email-protection) * * * churchboy ever since that disease worked its' way through the world like a plague, humans have grown scarce.
My Winged Lover
Conctructive critisism is greatly welcome. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ my winged lover pale moonlight shone over my head.
Dragon's Gift - Chapter 7 (WIP)
If anyone sees any errors in my story, please do not be afraid to give me some creative critisism, hopefully i can pull this fully around with the next few edits ^.^ chapter 7 the trio departed the makeshift village before the sun even rose the next morning
From Chains to Riches: Chapter 6
. ~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~\*~ end of part 6 i really appreciate comments on my writing, weather it be one to congratulate me or to critisize me, i still appreciate it.
To Pay A Man's Respects With Blood 1 - Randy's Beef Hold-Up
Finally, this story is not as good as i thought it'd turn out but i'm not good at opening scenes so progressing into the story should hopefully be better as i'll have a better idea of what i'll be doing then and all feedback and critisisms especially wanted
Winning/The stream
Please feel free to critisize. i slipped out of the stream; the water sliding off of my smooth scales and the short hair between them.
Mew-World: Proluoge
Comments, and helpful critisism are welcome, but no unnecasarry complaints, just because you don't like it.**
A Pandaren's Tale: Beating the Heat
If you have any constructive critisism that you think will help me improve, i'd be happy to hear it.
Foxtail Elementary: Chapter 1
I love critisism of all kinds, so please don't hold back.** _ _ **please enjoy, and be patient as the second chapter is developed. i've fallen in love with this story, and i do hope that you will too. thank you for reading!
The House Dahan part II: Chen's second day, part 1
Once again i urge anyone with constructive critisism to come out with it. so once again we shall assume you've not accidentally made a profile on an obviously adult site and opened this story. let's give your intellectual capacity that much credit.
Halloween with Momma Kitty: Chapter 1 ~ UNFINISHED
Please enjoy and comments and critisism is apreceated. especially posative ones. enjoy!
Taking care of your Brother
Comments and constructive critisism is appreciated. note that english is not my primary language, so some spelling errors may occur.