Interlude 12
Las lindas web comic spin-off, oc-insert the characters in this story (except the oc-insert) are © chalodillo **interlude 12** **beta-reader: ant0nius** **many centuries ago...** chaos was odd.
3. enter the grave.
#3 of royal blood the third part of the story ;p it took longer then i wanted thanks to ef that came sneaking trough. anyway i got some new proof and beta readers and i hope that i can speed up the rate of upload. i wanted to send this one off to second beta
Between Dreams and nightmares Beta2
Please comment at rate the work so we can go with one of the new beta readers between dreams and nightmares by ~tootall a great man once said, 'when we are first born into the world, we are born innocent.
Writing Advice: Show, Tell, Adverbs and Others
I'll definitely save beta readers as a topic for a following piece, but to be brief here, the feedback of others will really help you spot the parts of your story that need improvement - and not just regarding showing or telling.
Professor Benjamin
Also, i'm looking for a beta reader and rp friends! my discord is kozu#3040 if anyone wants to friend me on there. i'd love to meet some new people!
You promised (Chapter 1)
I'm still a little rusty, and desperately looking for a beta reader! i may have the next chapter out tomorrow or the day after hopefully at the latest. please please please read, and review!
Chocolates or whatever...
_welcome to crispen's overflow, where i post everything that isn't a main series while i am waiting for inspiration or for my beta readers' feedback. here, you will find one-offs, short stories, and maybe a poem or two.
Echte Liebe: Part 2
(i currently do not have an editor/beta reader, so there will be spelling mistakes) echte liebe: part 2 vincint (ven-cent) kept on running. his shadow stretched each time he ran passed a torch. the fire made his eyes sparkle.
AbortUS strikes back intro
Many thanks to those people who supported me and especially to my beta reader.
Paradise Ascendant
I don't have a beta reader, so feel free to correct any errors you notice in the comments.
Echte Liebe (true love) Part 1.
(i currently do not have an editor/beta reader, so there will be spelling mistakes) **echte liebe: part 1** vincint (ven-cent) traipsed into the pub, dragging his wheel-lock across the rough wood floor as is rapier hit against his leg.
A Difficult Decision Part 1
I'm sorry if this seems choppy and cheesy but its my first attempt and my grammar is rather bad as well, so i do apologize if you find errors, i'm going to be looking for a beta reader soon to help edit and read my stories before publishing them, hope you