Best Friends
I think i improved on grammar as it isn't flooded by commas like before but i'm not sure. whatever, enjoy this male on male sex story and voice your opinion on the comments~~ (remember i am more active on furafffinity)
Lazzxion Of The Rebellion - Love Circulation
I thought i might have been dead or had gone into a comma. i saw the face of what i believed to be a dog but blacked out again unable to get anything more than a burry sight of a memory.
One Lucky Cub part V
Baloo: "sorry little britches but apparently two of the three clerks to do the paper work for this event have been deported for doing comma mistakes, so there is a long line and it might be some time." kit groaned but conceded.
Junior Year: Day One
"phillips comma brent?" i raised my paw and he looked up, and straight at me. his eyes glared. i felt as if they were boring into my skull. "well well... i never knew that one of your kind would be brave or stupid enough to have me as a teacher."
No CGI: False Clutch 2
comma ran the tape camera, capturing everything else. c shuddered with her. j blew a load in empathy as this egg emerged. the yellow raptor noticed and grasped j’s cock with his free hand. they kissed.
Writing Tips vol. 2
When the quote ends in a direct modifier to the quote, such as 'he said', you end the quote in a comma (or question mark or exclamation point, if such is the case). you don't capitalize the following word unless it is a proper noun.
Joyride
Sorry i have such a furious penchant for commas. i hope it doesn't kill your boner (or lady boner). * * * it was twilight on a lonely stretch of country road, somewhere in the deserts of nevada.
Special Assignments - Chapter Thirty Eight
Endings aren't always a period or a full stop, sometimes they are a comma. it's a pause, time to reflect, and then you await what's on the other side. it's a philosophy i've tried to live with."
The Plan Fulfilled
Even in low doses it's still deadly so we need to give kenny plenty of rest, otherwise he might die or fall into a comma." said darren shooing the other camp mates away from the bed. "how long do i have to lay here before i can strangle you!?"
No CGI: The Sparring 3
comma. gloria. been going to that club for years and suddenly people notice what we are.] [we won’t have to be monsters forever.]
Forgive Me- David 1
Onslow, a mean old bobcat who has a tendency to drone on in-one-long-un-paused-sentence-so-that-nobody-can-interrupt, somehow managed to speak for an hour without using a single comma, let alone a period.
[Draft] Mundane
Pop. Pop. Crackle. I lay by the glowing hearth, flames dancing in front of me. Sounds of water tap, tap, along the roof and windows. It is so easy to fall asleep these days. The gentle crackling of fire, rhythmic taps of rain on the roof, the...